Your fight scenes are amazing! They're probably some of the best I've ever read. Your writing is also very good. It's super refreshing considering the quality of many other fanfictions in this fandom. This story is short and sweet. In reading it, you're taken on a journey and lose track of time. Did days pass, minutes or merely hours? The story was super captivating. Never before has a story with a WC of under 40k been able to steal my heart. Amazing job! You're a talented writer.

Thank you...

Thanks

This was so cute! You paced the plot very well. I wasn't so into the action scenes as they felt kind of redundant since they were a group of no no-names attacking yet, I still appreciated how they built the trust between Sasuke and transparent-Naruto. The ending was written beautifully. You left us with a farewell of infinite, positive opportunities and that almost always is a good feeling to walk away from a story with. It's also nice how undefined their relationship is. It can be considered a friendly/brotherly or the start of something far more romantic. All in all, this was a great fic. I'll be sure to check your profile for more tastes of magnificence.

Time for the sequel!

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Amazing!

I really really like this

Omg i am in loooove with this fic ;u; thank you so much for writing it

Wow! Cool story bro. Though I was hoping for a more lemony scene. Something kissy-kissy?

One of the funniest, most well written fics I've ever read. Definitely a favourite. The plot was superb and I loved the little twist with Sasuke passing out at the end! Brilliant. Also you write action scenes marvellously - I'll be taking notes. Really really well done. Loved it!

awww, cute ending :)

I love read sweet story, thank autor.

This was a beautiful ending. I'm so glad everything worked out T_T Sasuke hugging Barto, keeping him close and his confessions were totally lovely. Thank you for writing this!

That was exciting and scary and awesome, nice fighting scenes. I was so anxious for them. So stoked that Naruto was able to get some fighting, only you would be able to do that Naruto. Tsukai is a pretty cool client. I love your characterizations of everyone. Naruto and Sasuke's bantering and teamwork are the best. It's also good to see Sakura contributing before she got taken out.