Reviews for Marbles
silverwingedsun chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
lol cute!
HappyStickofTNT chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
ROTF! That was too cute! I'm going to print this story out and add it to my growing collection!
SilverKitsune18 chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
Eclipse just can't resist Raenef!:D
Iverin chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
ravengrey chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Well, it was short and sweet, but the only part that really made me laugh is the “Hi Eclipse,
Jayden Winters chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
cute. keep up the good writing skills.

~Lady Meru
Ishikawa Ran chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
...“Hi Eclipse,
Anne chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Hehe. Cute. *teehee* -Anne
hm chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Okky? This seems kind of piontless. Am I missing something?
Wolflower chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
Aw! Very cute! I could just see Raenef's face as he begged Eclipse to allow him to play with the marbles. You should of had something where Erutis and Chris were outside with their ear to the door, making gags of what Eclipse would be doing with a child's toy. Very cute story! -
Goddess of the Wolves
jk chapter 1 . 4/11/2004
That was too cute! I think it was good...
Puppyeyes chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Okay, I wish to point out one little thing...the line "I like your balls can I play with them" you not know how seriously wrong that is? I saw that while laughing, mind. I heard about this story from my friends, and they enjoyed it too, by the way. ANyway, just wanted to point that out! Have a nice day! :)
SakuKitsune The Chibi chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
O... marbles great story WOOF!
saturnstar55 chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
Tee-hee! That was really good! But I still think you should have added some ball gags at the end, especially after "Raenef smiled. 'I like your balls can I play with them?' " sorry... I guess I just have a dirty mind _
DarkangelWings chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
Very nice. I liked it. _~