Reviews for Whoever Fights Monsters
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Aw... Seto...
Syuuk chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
So short and simple, but it really conveys the twisted-ness, cruelty and wickedness. Nice work!
Kiwee chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
Instead of focusing on what Yami is, I keep thinking about what made him who he is. Was it a process much like this? Being slowly, so slowly suffocated, weighed down, ground to pieces? Trying so desperately to keep a piece of yourself intact, no matter how small, knowing you can't win, but never, never, never wanting to give in?

But then, millennia is a long time, and even the strongest break after such a period. Just like Seto will, inevitably.

The bit in the middle, about how Yugi cried as Seto fell-where is he, anyways? I hope he's...not stuck behind Yami's eyes, forced to watch as his friends are crushed, one by one, and powerless to do anything.
zoomboom chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Yami is a sadistic bustard , yay ! I like it !
Ethereal Fae chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
That was beautifully disturbing...I love it!
angel hakusho chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
this is sad :[
heartslogos chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
That is so sad. So how many chains is that? I think 88-90 right? Please reply or make this longer it's to short!
Mistress-of-eternal-Darkness chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
PAINFUL...that was simply painful...hard to explain...but that's the only word i can find for it...

awesome job...

~Riko
Pointed Teeth chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
That was beautiful. In a dark and twisted kind of way. I love the imagery of the chains.
435177 chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
oh! This is such a cool twist! Evil Yami breaks the souls of all his friends! NIFTY!

And I love how you just throw the reader into it, not really telling them a lot about it. I didn't realize that Yami was the evil guy until I had finished a coupld paragraphs, sentences, whatever...very cool.
BH chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
This story is awesome! Okay, so maybe I just like the image of Kaiba in chains... But still, very cool idea of Yami being corrupted and destroying all his friends. This could totally be a bigger story, but it stands okay on its own. Keep on writing!
Dark Sorceress Hecate chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Very nice. Angsty and dark and cruel and very nice.

~Hecate
Pernshinigami chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Hi, I just wanted to say that that one sent chills down my spine. I never thought that Yami would be cruel, or could be cast that way. But Seto as the submissive? (shudders) That was cool anyway!

Ja ato de!
angelsoul03 chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
That was beautifully written...
Tuulikki chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
Quite wonderful. Disturbing too, yes, but still wonderful... *pokes* You've got talent.
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*sigh* So, that'll be the last YGO fic for now from you... (read your bio). Well, it's not that serious since there are many I haven't read yet. But... there are just so many others that are abandoning YGO too cause of the Mary-Sues and OOCness... *wails* What will we do when all decent authors run away? Poor YGO fandom will be abandoned at the mercy of MS authors! ... Okay, you write whatever you want to, of course, and we'll try to get by without you. ~
I'd better stop this babbling now... Great job with this one!
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