|Reviews for The Beautifly Effect|
| BenMills28 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
I first read this on The Pokémon Tower, and read it a few times on there. That was a couple of years ago. Re-reading it on here has rekindled my love for this story. It has everything, and the way it escalates to the final act is magnificent!
| MalachiteFlames chapter 33 . 4/22/2009
Wow, this was very interesting. Much different than I've ever read before, but I really enjoied!
| MalachiteFlames chapter 4 . 4/22/2009
aw, great job! I don't like these nice nights to end so soon... *grins
| MalachiteFlames chapter 3 . 4/22/2009
This chapter was awesome! We really don't get to see Ritchy too often, so I adored this chap!
| Greyscale Tragedy chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
I remember reading this fic a long, long time ago, but never reviewed it.
Just want to say that this still makes me WOW after the longest time :) I love how everything nicely transitions and finally builds into a story where something simple flips the entire world upside down.
| Kagusu chapter 7 . 4/15/2006
AWESOME! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! Hee hee. This is a great fanfic. I'm still on the 7th chapter though.
| Clare chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
I'm going to have to find time to read this all the way through
| The Fuzy Llama chapter 33 . 11/20/2005
critique: It seems like the plot moves a bit too fast... though I guess it'd have to if you want to keep it under 40 chapters. *shrug* And that's about all I can think of... I loved the ending! _
| I Like My Sitar chapter 33 . 11/3/2005
wow. This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, you are a truly great author.
| Lil Wolf Syaoran 23 chapter 29 . 6/13/2005
this is a very well writen story!
off to the next chappie! _
| neverhere1997 chapter 29 . 6/10/2005
oh wow, that was well written, will you be continuing this fic?
| Windfox chapter 26 . 3/12/2005
This story isn't incredible, but I love how you have moved the plot along. From a stolen hat, to Ash's death, to Pokerus running rampant, to a regional war. I can't wait to see what happens next
| Raptar of Exodia chapter 25 . 2/8/2005
I'm extremely interested. In no sense of arrogance, that's a fairly rare mark for the record. It's getting better as it progresses, but I have central criticism for earlier, just to watch- the character relations weren't as even as could be. Ash reacted the wrong way to everything that came at him, while Richie seems to be next in line for Sainthood.
I'm more impressed by quality work turning up in Pokeliterature than most else. For... obvious reasons, that.
| The Fuzy Llama chapter 25 . 2/6/2005
This story is turning out like a novel! I love all the twists and turns you throw into the plot. *2 thumbs up*
| Miss Takin chapter 22 . 1/9/2005
Ahh! I can't believe that all of this happened...just because Ash lost his hat trying to catch that Beautifly...it seems like so long ago in the story. I like how the story doesn't just end with Ash and Misty dying, this chapter being called "The Nightmare Begins" just gets me more excited and impatient for the next chapter. Hehe, I'm writing a really bad review, I would put a quote here that I really like but I like the whole story! It's amazing! Keep writing!