Reviews for The Beautifly Effect |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well, things definitely escalated quickly. That darn Beautifly... :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I first read this on The Pokémon Tower, and read it a few times on there. That was a couple of years ago. Re-reading it on here has rekindled my love for this story. It has everything, and the way it escalates to the final act is magnificent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was very interesting. Much different than I've ever read before, but I really enjoied! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, great job! I don't like these nice nights to end so soon... *grins |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was awesome! We really don't get to see Ritchy too often, so I adored this chap! |
![]() ![]() I remember reading this fic a long, long time ago, but never reviewed it. Just want to say that this still makes me WOW after the longest time :) I love how everything nicely transitions and finally builds into a story where something simple flips the entire world upside down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! Hee hee. This is a great fanfic. I'm still on the 7th chapter though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to have to find time to read this all the way through |
![]() ![]() ![]() critique: It seems like the plot moves a bit too fast... though I guess it'd have to if you want to keep it under 40 chapters. *shrug* And that's about all I can think of... I loved the ending! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, you are a truly great author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very well writen story! off to the next chappie! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, that was well written, will you be continuing this fic? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story isn't incredible, but I love how you have moved the plot along. From a stolen hat, to Ash's death, to Pokerus running rampant, to a regional war. I can't wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm extremely interested. In no sense of arrogance, that's a fairly rare mark for the record. It's getting better as it progresses, but I have central criticism for earlier, just to watch- the character relations weren't as even as could be. Ash reacted the wrong way to everything that came at him, while Richie seems to be next in line for Sainthood. I'm more impressed by quality work turning up in Pokeliterature than most else. For... obvious reasons, that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is turning out like a novel! I love all the twists and turns you throw into the plot. *2 thumbs up* |