Ahh! I can't believe that all of this happened...just because Ash lost his hat trying to catch that Beautifly...it seems like so long ago in the story. I like how the story doesn't just end with Ash and Misty dying, this chapter being called "The Nightmare Begins" just gets me more excited and impatient for the next chapter. Hehe, I'm writing a really bad review, I would put a quote here that I really like but I like the whole story! It's amazing! Keep writing!

WHA! O_O *worship* O_O Now lets think...who could the person be...

Original Character...Brock...Tracey...Other random people I have forgotten the name of...O_O

*is addicted to this fic*

- CyNicole

Poor Houndour! *is sad* My mind is zapped from all the holiday festivities so I can't really write a good review, sorry!_;

poor Mareep... *conforts the other Mareep*

At least one person is finally starting to mend, but everywhere else there is still chaos. I have to wonder, how much longer can this possibly go on?

Yay! Another chapter! Too bad Prof. Oak is retiring early, but I would too if all that stuff happened to people I knew...

I really liked your story so far (I've even added it to my favorites)! Nothing much happened in this chapter except Richie's new love for Abigail and how he moved on since Misty's death (though I haven't seen him mourn too much). Will Abigail be the next one to die? Continue! :)

Poor Richie... I seem to be saying poor (fill in blank) a lot. *sweat drops* I have a feeling this chapter is leading to something big. hm...

This story is getting to be too much for me... but I can't... stop... reading it...

It's such an intense story that I can't help but be drawn into it.

What will Professor Oak do when he finds out? I'll stay tuned for the next wave of tragedies!

The story maintains its quality, and the horror lives on. Yay!

At your request, I read Cyberwraiths stories, because I figured that a good author/authoress should be able to identify other good authors/authoresses. _

The main purpose for this review is so that I can check my Review History and see if you've updated yet...Since I'm too lazy/stupid to put this on my "Author alert list" or whatever it is.

That can't be good. So the death tole is Misty, the unborn baby, Ash, and Gary, right? Or maybe Pikachu fits into that list too... The battle was VERY realistic. If I were you I would be patting myself on the back with eight arms. Don't have eight arms you say? Anything is possible when you have that much talent. n_n

Very well written, Im really impressed with the details of the battles! Not everyone has a good sense at writing action...

heeheehee *points to self and hold up sign saying 'Action-Writing Impared'*

*laughs*

Anyways, doing great so far.

And I believe you when you said its not based after the movie, because it most certainly doesnt seem like it so far.

*claps* Off to the next chappie!

Ja ne!

~Akemi-chan~

Aw... dats sad. Poor Mist.!

I love your fic so far!

Im gonna go read the next chappie! Ja ne!

~Akemi-chan~

*claps*

You are writing a fanfic based on the chaos theory! *nods* Like in the movie, The Butterfly Effect!

Really great movie! *smiles*

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Keep Writing!

~Akemi-chan~

*Twitches*

If this were any other story, I'd say Pikachu evolves, destroyes major cities, and is killed by authorities while distracted by the Beautifly.

But, judging by what we've seen so far, I'd say that things are going to get way more seriously screwed up than that.

Yay!