|Reviews for In the Rose Garden|
| g.tripp chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
i think it's beautiful, i like the characters etc.. too tired to write more
| parhelia chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Nicely done! I do have a likely for dark!fic. I also love SB/RL slash, and Black family stuff, so this story was very welcome. The incest hints were just enough to get the point across without being squicky. Bravo to you. I mean, of course Regulus would love Sirius. Who could resist Sirius? ;-)
| I Write Tragedies chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
-more of a wail then a sob-
Than, not then.
-I rumor to myself.-
Er... rumour? I don't understand why that word is there.
-where only deaf ears will listen to it.-
How about 'where the information will fall on deaf ears.'
What leader? If you're referring to Voldemort, the Blacks aren't Death Eaters. They're dark wizards, sure, but that doesn't make them Death Eaters.
- —most of my family,-
Please don't use hyphens. Use commas.
-Night hides all outside, -
Doesn't quite work.
-and that is where I will head.-
So, instead of and.
-I step out unto-
Hyphen abuse! Hyphen abuse!
-cascading over his round face.-
Uck. Since when does Sirius have a round face? Are you implying that he's fat?
-A form rises besides that-
Beside, not besides.
- —pretty, redheaded— -
-was the girlfriend to the Potter boy-
was the Potter boy's girlfriend...
- —it was his name— -
It's just so annoying...
-seem to worry,-
Care, not worry. I don't see why they'd worry about that anyways.
- —our account.”-
My poor little hyphen friend...
- —his family— -
I almost ignored that.
-into him flesh-
His, not him.
I was completely confused as to how Regulus felt about Sirius. It sounded like he wanted him sexually but then he's saying that he's disgusted because he and Remus are together. I don't know... I didn't like it as much as I like most of your fics.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
That is just sick
| Convoluted Passion chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
It would make sense in so many ways...yet I refuse to see sirius that way. I just don't think he's like that. But your stories ARE excellent.
| oogleberry chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Katly, dearie. I really like this ficlet, wonderful one-shot. *Returns SUPPORT!* Poor Sirius.
| janeeyrefreak chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
Interesting, padfoot. I have not read any of your work in quite awhile, and am excited to get to the rest. :)
| Reicheru chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Oh wow...I love your writing style, so beautiful and how the words flow! It's an unusual fiction, coming from the POV of Sirius's brother. I liked the hinting at incest, since I happen to hint at incest in other various stories, too. But this fiction was wonderful, I have to go check out more by you.
| Louiseifer chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
OOH! **Squeek!** Darkfic!
This is, as usual my dear, very VERY good. I've never read a fic with Regulus in before, but now I'm rather interested in him. Incest is always rather scary, but you handled it well, and I wouldn't expect any less from you _
However, I am out of Remus and Sirius plushies, so you'll have to have a Lucius plushie
**Wanders back into own weird world of Remus/Lucius**
| Maxwell Demon chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
It's been awhile since I read RL/SB but this is definitely supreme. This is good and heavy just adds to the texture. Like a wine that has been aged to perfection, this story is one of the best I've yet to see on
| LBx chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Beautiful: plain and simple. Excellent work!
| Wyall Jared chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
That was very good!
| ddz008 chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
It was so dark... and I like it... a great way to explain Regulus and Sirius relationship...
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
| Cobalt Violet chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
*Hands thousands of cookies* This is...amazing, fantastic, beautiful, astounding...ah, there are so many adjectives that could be used for it - but words cannot really describe. _
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful; I adored this insight into Regulus's mind.
| GhostofYaoiPast chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
I loved this. No, love isn't strong enough of a word. I fucking loved this. This was so well written... you captured reguglus' emotions and thoughts perfectly... i try not to feel sorry for the other Blacks, but i nearly bawled reading this. This was great. Keep up the good work.