Reviews for In the Rose Garden
g.tripp chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
i think it's beautiful, i like the characters etc.. too tired to write more
parhelia chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Nicely done! I do have a likely for dark!fic. I also love SB/RL slash, and Black family stuff, so this story was very welcome. The incest hints were just enough to get the point across without being squicky. Bravo to you. I mean, of course Regulus would love Sirius. Who could resist Sirius? ;-)
I Write Tragedies chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
-more of a wail then a sob-

Than, not then.

-I rumor to myself.-

Er... rumour? I don't understand why that word is there.

-where only deaf ears will listen to it.-

How about 'where the information will fall on deaf ears.'

-our leader,-

What leader? If you're referring to Voldemort, the Blacks aren't Death Eaters. They're dark wizards, sure, but that doesn't make them Death Eaters.

- —most of my family,-

Please don't use hyphens. Use commas.

-Night hides all outside, -

Doesn't quite work.

-and that is where I will head.-

So, instead of and.

-I step out unto-

Onto.

-finally—finally-

Hyphen abuse! Hyphen abuse!

-cascading over his round face.-

Uck. Since when does Sirius have a round face? Are you implying that he's fat?

-A form rises besides that-

Beside, not besides.

- —pretty, redheaded— -

-was the girlfriend to the Potter boy-

was the Potter boy's girlfriend...

- —it was his name— -

It's just so annoying...

-seem to worry,-

Care, not worry. I don't see why they'd worry about that anyways.

- —our account.”-

My poor little hyphen friend...

- —his family— -

I almost ignored that.

-into him flesh-

His, not him.

-

I was completely confused as to how Regulus felt about Sirius. It sounded like he wanted him sexually but then he's saying that he's disgusted because he and Remus are together. I don't know... I didn't like it as much as I like most of your fics.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
That is just sick
Convoluted Passion chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
It would make sense in so many ways...yet I refuse to see sirius that way. I just don't think he's like that. But your stories ARE excellent.
oogleberry chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
Katly, dearie. I really like this ficlet, wonderful one-shot. *Returns SUPPORT!* Poor Sirius.
janeeyrefreak chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
Interesting, padfoot. I have not read any of your work in quite awhile, and am excited to get to the rest. :)
Reicheru chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Oh wow...I love your writing style, so beautiful and how the words flow! It's an unusual fiction, coming from the POV of Sirius's brother. I liked the hinting at incest, since I happen to hint at incest in other various stories, too. But this fiction was wonderful, I have to go check out more by you.
Louiseifer chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
OOH! **Squeek!** Darkfic!
This is, as usual my dear, very VERY good. I've never read a fic with Regulus in before, but now I'm rather interested in him. Incest is always rather scary, but you handled it well, and I wouldn't expect any less from you _
However, I am out of Remus and Sirius plushies, so you'll have to have a Lucius plushie
**Wanders back into own weird world of Remus/Lucius**
Maxwell Demon chapter 1 . 5/9/2004
It's been awhile since I read RL/SB but this is definitely supreme. This is good and heavy just adds to the texture. Like a wine that has been aged to perfection, this story is one of the best I've yet to see on
LBx chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Beautiful: plain and simple. Excellent work!
Wyall Jared chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
That was very good!
ddz008 chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
GREAT!
It was so dark... and I like it... a great way to explain Regulus and Sirius relationship...
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Cobalt Violet chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
*Hands thousands of cookies* This is...amazing, fantastic, beautiful, astounding...ah, there are so many adjectives that could be used for it - but words cannot really describe. _
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful; I adored this insight into Regulus's mind.
GhostofYaoiPast chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
I loved this. No, love isn't strong enough of a word. I fucking loved this. This was so well written... you captured reguglus' emotions and thoughts perfectly... i try not to feel sorry for the other Blacks, but i nearly bawled reading this. This was great. Keep up the good work.
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