Reviews for Take No Notice
Alex chapter 1 . 5/30/2004
Good verry good and the strange is that you can only understand whom the boy is at the end! Wicked!
butterflydreaming chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
Oh, very inspired. She's a very sympathetic OC. Also, I really like that she's a "Watanabe" - I see this name so much that I'm sure that it's equivalent to "Smith". So, that makes Junko a kind of Everyman.
I was wondering if you were going to leave the reader unsure about who it was that stopped to talk to her, but you revealed that in a way that provided a good ending.
Laurus Nobilis chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
I loved it! It's just like Touya to notice her, and I really liked what he said about being used to looking straight at things.