Reviews for Beware Kakarot and Other DBZ Poems
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
vegeta goku are the best
unlike the other rest
the dragonballs grant wishes nobody knows
are planets are filled with foes
krillen dies way to much
im suprised he is not mush
we walk through feilds of green
fillin kinda tired need a sesu bean
Justin p chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
i live for dbz, this poem makes me see that im not the onley one who truly loves it. i thank you for this chance to veiw another persons love. some people have it some dont. with props, JMP
akaasharamanna chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
not a poem nice
Ashii Black chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Hey lover. Once I get the chance...I'll actually be able to talk to you in greater depth! We're entering finals week...and school is OUT May 26th!

*hugs* I love you SO much

~Ashii
justsimplymeagain chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
pretty good like it...
Gosha chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
hmm...is there a rhyming pattern here? anyways, preferred the first one a lot more, but this one was good. Good use of vocabulary! Well done_
Gosha chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
I have to say...that was one of the most amazing poems i have ever read! So in character and just amazing!write more!_
Layana Aoyama chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
That was so great. I loved how you put your words. And at least you didn't call him Goku the whole time, like some people I know. So that is a good thing in my case that you have called hi, Kakarot and not Goku. Oh damn I can't believe I just that name once again.
Itsu chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
OMG! i love u koku...I mean CoD...I mean Child of the Dragon...w/e I love it (no really) and yep thats that...g2g later and love ya
babygurl123456789hotsrxxyma chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
plaz add more to this story
A Saiyan's Tale chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Nicely Done, Child of the Dragon!
Lea chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
HI! i think that poem was really funny and quite well written. I can actually imagine vegeta cursing that under his breath...
Keep up the good work. I love reading the work of aspiring writers. I myself am one
TTFN