Reviews for Confessions of the Master |
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![]() ![]() Gash... The last sentence is the foot-blow on the clutching fingers. I should fall into sleep but let's say it's christmas and chapter 11 is my gift. |
![]() ![]() I'm not sure which one was the biggest ass ;) Holmes, perhaps, for bringing por injuried Watson to the falls on all places. And yet, the other loging was a good-one too. Man... I cant help but have the deepest sympathy for the lovers of darkest times (I know our time has nothing to be proud of but we made some little progresses anyway) |
![]() ![]() I have a hard time to picture Watson as the sarcastic-one, but otherwise... It's just wonderful the way the 'case' is mirroring the main plot. Helps us to understand the deepness of the engaged feelings. And the last scene... *speechless* I may have read it in a peculiar way, but... first I held my breath when Watson discovered the truth, then (second bullet, thank you) I swear it was fear when the doctor realized it was made for him to understand. I KNEW it was not the right stream but I couldn't help being alongside with Watson, knowing a shadow was looking at us, ready to confront our minds already racked by the turmoil. It was almost a surprise (and relief) to read about the absent Holmes and his present thoughts. For your info now I'm certainly ill (influeza, who knows?) and dead frozen but I can't go to bed, hanging on a cliff as I am :) |
![]() ![]() 'a great mind... with two attics' You masterize words. And what a work! I admire the effects you made with this flash-back and various POV (kind of) chapter. For now and further, sorry if my comments are obscurs or non-readable. I do certainly not handle english with your talent! ;) |
![]() ![]() ... I have no words And it's just chapter 6. You are going to kill me, aren't you? Let's say this chapter was like watching a movie and reading a hidden doyle all the same. |
![]() ![]() O my... Holmes, what in the name of - have you just tried? I must say it's quite refreshing (now I'm talking like him!) to have a fic were obviously all the *love* matters are not settled before the fun. Your story is really good in plot, writing, reflexions and building of the characters. I mean even your 'case' is making me hold my breath! (that's the reason why I'm still outside the house at 1:42 am with my laptop, freezing, in a poor attempt to keep my internet connection on ;) |
![]() ![]() yeah I recon Watson is a bit er... unsteady? But you prove so far we can rely on you to make it trough a pretty good story. So here I am on the road to the next chap :) |
![]() ![]() poor poor Watson! Honestly! The man went trough so much, and then this last blow... I can picture so vividly this 'mere mortal living among the gods' thing. It's heartbreaking I swear it is! |
![]() ![]() a very complete story! There are so much depths to explore. Will W be jealous of J/S? Will he be cured from is bitterness? Will S behave with the child? May a child be able to understand one dark-moods and sudden selfishness? Will W cope with his up-to-come revelations about his friend (non) feelings (which may be like discovering an unknown person hidden inside a friend)? And many other questions but I forgot half of them :) |
![]() ![]() 'default chapter' indeed! XD I cried in earnest and I laughed all the same. Quite an astonishing mix for a 'simple' fic. Thank you again and again for your amazing work and now... sorry but I can't wait! see you next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_O I LOVE IT! This is an awesome story! Poor Sherlock! Watson left him again! This story has just the right amount of Angst! I'm looking forward to your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE CONTINUE. My god. I read it all in one sitting and I'm desperate for the end! Please do not abandon this! *_* |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting story! While I am a sucker for fluff, I still love to see more realistically complicated relationships in fanfiction, and this is definitely that. Josh is adorable, and Watson needs a good smack for his horrible parenting abilities. I hope the last line of this chapter proves to be true, but I will be anxiously awaiting more regardless of the outcome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One has to have hope after all, doesn't it? This fic is definitely something, very well written, would probably be a best seller. I enjoyed very much the time I spent reading it so far. :D Kisses |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING! That is really all I can think of to say. I can't believe it has taken me this long to find this wonderful, enticing, beautiful story. You do Mr. Holmes and Dr. Watson Proud! Please keep writing! |