Reviews for A Passing Indisposition
Kang Xiu chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
I-

It was good to read this again now that I understand it better. I remember when you wrote it and I didn't, but-

Well, there's Zara. It's /Zara/, in the most painful, plain, her-ish way. It's Right.

You really are amazing.
Gavin Gunhold chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Aw... I haven't read these in ages. And talk about your underappreciated fandom. Oh well, can't be helped.

Anyways... as far as I can remember, your Zara seems very much in character - and what a terrific character. I love how she's grumpy and grumpy about being sentimental, but really just sentimental. Very nice :D
fireseal chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
I love how you portray Zara; it stays true to her character.

"she hadn't learned how it felt to lose an argument, or break something she couldn't mend, or walk through a dark alley at night, or fall in love" - And I really like this line. It's so... "aw..." x3