I'd love to know the ending of this story. It's so good and well written.

oh god!why you let it end here? X(
its still hanging until now, what will happpend to she survive or dead?
i'm so curious right now and to bad soujirou had to die :(

Please update this is such a great fanfiction, I would say my absolute favourite Kaoru x Kenshin fanfiction. Please update I really want to know what happens. *crys*

It's a relief that Megumi isn't going to be all bitch. Just foxy. :)

LOL, Soujiro is cute! I admire his fortitude for braving a towel clad Kaoru. But then again it was probably lucky that Kenshin wasn't in the same room. :)

Interesting concept.

I hope you don't mind me dropping in a few reviews after so long. :)

love it :D

AH! NO! Please update! WHAT HAPPENS? I"M DONE FOR! I'm just kidding. heehee. But awesome job so far.

OMG you need to finish this story love it. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Omg i 3 it! its 100%- if u minus the tiny spelling errors...anyway chocolatechipp ur an awesome write try 2 keep updating!

Please write one more chapter! This story is so good! Please! You have done a great work!

The poem at the beginning of this chapter is my favorite! I like how you write one for each chapter... Also, I liked how Megumi warmed up to Kaoru over fashion.

You're a really good writer, and this story is entertaining, but I think you might want to make sure you take more time to edit when you work on another story. I've noticed that the last few chapters seem to be written rather quickly. I do that too, just so I can get updates out, but I've decided to finish all of my stories before I post them, so I can avoid hasty jobs. Just some advice, hope you don't mind. Use what you will, or not at all! -ce

Oh, geez, poor Kaoru...she finally knows what day it is. That was a nice touch. She is so funny in this!

And please tell me that her kitty isn't dead! That would be really sad...

Great job! Short is okay, you know. It's good writing, so I'll read whatever you've written. :)

Hm, Kaoru is cute. I love her line at the end, "Oh don't worry, it will." That's definitely Kaoru, Little Miss Feisty. I'm looking forward to the Kaoru/Kenshin interactions in this. You've made them pretty unique in this story.

Also, you made Megumi's "gangster" persona excellent as well!

Lol! This is great! I love the whole gangsters demeanor you've given to Kenshin, Sano, Misao, Yahiko, and Aoshi. Especially Sano and Yahiko, they really fit the bill here. So glad I found this, it's such an entertaining read so far! And the poem at the beginning... nice touch :)