This was a very interesting and cute story. I felt sad for Kakashi in the end.

o.O ...You've got to be shitting me!

o.O ...How ANYONE could MURDER a CHILD is BEYOND ME! ...I hate Kakashi now. Thanks alot.

You should be happy I know there's a sequel or I'd be after your life. Just kidding ;p. I'm off to read the sequel.

~Trii

Wait... that little kiss from little Iruka was Kakashi's first. -goes into an unstopable laughing fit-

~Trii

i like the story so far it is intreging abd fun to read i hope u make other storys like thiss

i loved this story, i just wish i could have seen what happened with iruka and kakashi when they woke up. it's not fair! but at least you did a sequal!

Hurled with the precision that Kakashi was known for, a three year old zoomed through the air, past tens of people, towards a pair of teens.

Sees Iruka go flying... AH!-hands on cheeks-

Noes!-runs off to catch said Chibi- Caught you!

Kakashi!-goes ninja and kicks his ass- No throwing chibis!

This is good! I like it alot!

oh man xD

I saw the sequel to this but I read this one first for obvious reasons. It was too great for words xD

It's too bad Iruka doesn't remember D8 That's kinda sad and somehow hilarious xD Might say more but it's on to the next part now :D

and I couldn’t make everyone gouge out their eyes with dull kunai ... I mean if I couldn't do awesome, fantastic poses with him for the good of Konoha!

Heehee!

YES THE 503 ERROR IS FINALLY GONE! ok i just have to say something

"On the way over I noticed that I was wearing my teddy bear pajamas and had to turn back because it would be most unfortunate if someone attacked me and I wasn't able to protect myself." The shadow ninja nodded his head solemnly, "Cotton animal undergarments just aren't what they used to-"

THAT was HILARIOUS i love this fanfiction it's one of the best it's right up there with side effects in my favorites

Hi! i finished reading this fic months ago. and i keep trying to start "Teddy Bears".; And now that i have a deviantart account i was wondering if i could draw some scenes from here. i luv how little Iruka put Haiku under Mr. Ukki! This is a really sweet story, BTW.

i think tis storys funny

is there going to be a last chapter where iruka and kakashi get together? :D i'd love you forever!

heh! lovely!