Reviews for Second Chance
SithKnight-Galen chapter 13 . 8/1/2004
Now that was a storybook ending after all, the prince was able to reunite with his Cinderella after all. There really isn't much more that I can say on this, other than I cannot wait to read your next story. they can only get better!
Zack chapter 13 . 7/31/2004
Great story! I would have stopped at Ch 12 though, ch 13 is a bit too rosy for me.I hope Kelly will show up in the sequel, that girl is hot!

And she has quite an attitude!
gppr chapter 13 . 7/31/2004
Charlatan: true. :) I thought about my options and it crossed my mind that Marlene and Sera could come back to find Scott dead from his injuries and Lancer a victim of suicide... but that would have been Shakespearean, to say the least. lol.
aragonvaar chapter 13 . 7/31/2004
Bwahaha! What a great closing line! I enjoyed this :)
The Charlatan chapter 13 . 7/30/2004
Yay, it does end happily ever after after all. . . though I have to admit it does feel a tad like a Deus Ex Machina. . .
SithKnight-Galen chapter 12 . 7/26/2004
Now that is one heckuva cliff-hanger you left us with on this chapter. At first I thought that this WAS the conclusion, but if that were the case, this would be one crappy second typical of life, but crappy nonetheless.

You are keeping me riveted enough to come back for each one of your installments and I find your writing style to be smooth and free-flowing, while carrying over many scense at once. Keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for the next serial.
aragonvaar chapter 12 . 7/25/2004
Man, you sure don't believe in happy endings, do you?

Snif. I enjoyed it, and it's certainly poetic justice, but you can't blame we for wishing things had turned out better. :D
aragonvaar chapter 11 . 7/19/2004
*Bites nails real hard* Ek! Where's it going from here? :)
aragonvaar chapter 10 . 7/4/2004
Hit him again Lancer :D Seriously though, things are getting interesting here. Hope you update again soon. (Illustrations for the most recent chapters would also be welcome, when time allows you to :)
Zack chapter 9 . 7/1/2004
Finally Dawson got her man!

He's not as tough as he looks ;-)
aragonvaar chapter 9 . 7/1/2004
Talk about an oh-no moment...or ten. Sera and Rook really ARE gonna kill Scott :D
aragonvaar chapter 8 . 6/28/2004
Ah, yes, as always it s*s to be Scott, or in love w/ him! :D. James is lucky his CO was so angst-ridden over all this-oh he might have gotten a sock in the jaw for his slur on Bernard's courage.

Please continue when you get a chance.
aragonvaar chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Just reviewing again to play w/ the new "highly recommend" feature :)
SHAWN PROVONCHA chapter 7 . 6/12/2004
aragonvaar chapter 7 . 6/11/2004
Wasn't sure if the last one went thru, so: neat chapter, you really ahve me worried, here's hoping Kelly eventually catches onto James's merits (do I detect some chemistry there?)
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