Reviews for Fall of Shadows
Kate Snape21 chapter 3 . 12/18/2016
awe poor Snape :( i hope harry gets away from the Dursley's but i also understand not wanting to go back to where his godfather used to live hopefully Snape finds him and takes him to Hogwarts or something :) i also don't like the idea of Molly going through what more or less belongs to harry, she should allow harry to look threw everything if he wants to and leave him be not snoop and think she is helping... sorry thats just my opinion and i don't mean to sound rude or anything
Saissister chapter 3 . 5/2/2011
Molly is supposed to be caring xD She is mean to Snape! Update soon
Griffin Raven chapter 3 . 12/7/2009
What a truly brilliant beginning to this story, to which I can't wait to read further chapters as well. All the residents at Grimmauld Place seem to be all wrapped up in whats going on around them. Although I can readily understand poor Severus's frustration at not been able to get near a potions lab...poor guy really must be going nuts! Though he seems more annoyed with himself in going along with Albus's ideas/plans of him not staying at hogwarts or going to his family home. At times Severus seems to obey (and mutter to his hearts content about that he doesn't want to do this or that) what Albus wants him to...he almost obeys him as if Albus was his father (or father figure). But why didn't anyone notice anything strange about young Harry's note.

I've always thought it weird that they'd sent young Harry back to the Dursleys twice when he was suffering from grief (i.e. watching both Cedric and Sirius being killed). I mean look how Harry was in the 5th year after the summer at the Dursleys! The subtle changes in Harry's appearance is due to unexpected parentage?
Legolas Anime Luver chapter 3 . 4/24/2009
disasterpiecex chapter 3 . 8/1/2008
This is a great story so far.

Are you planning to update it any time soon?
honore chapter 3 . 5/9/2008
That bit was great but I need more. ... looking forward to more. Oh,. is Harry still in the basement? Will Snape go and find him. Heck, I'm ready to go and find him. Thanks
BlackHalliwell chapter 3 . 11/18/2006
luvbooks chapter 3 . 10/15/2006
pleaseplease write more
Lexie Lupin chapter 3 . 8/8/2006
This story has a good start so far. You should write more.
zafaran chapter 3 . 5/14/2005
More please. You've got a very nice beginning here, and I'd like to see where you take it from here. I do have a bit of an issue with the Dumbledore wants research done but won't allow Severus to do it aspect of the story because he's going to Forcibly get Severus to let people in. It would work a whole lot better if it were people Severus could actually tolerate. Weasley's *ain't* in that class. Sorry, but put someone who's a high-degree introvert like Severus with screaming extravert's like the Weasley's is going to drive him utterly mad (and that's without the extreme educational mismatch that leaves him absolutely *no* common ground to have a conversation in which just exacerbates the situation). Dumbledore could use a grounding in the Meyers-Briggs Personality Type Indicator. Severus probably tests out as an extreme end range INTJ like I do, and by this point in the story I'd be ready to *kill* someone to get some peace and quiet. Other than that, keep up the good work. Zafaran

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Potions and Snitches New Fics chapter 1 . 11/13/2004
Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :)

Irish Dancing chapter 2 . 9/14/2004
It's Grimmauld.

You need to brush up on grammar. However, most people on need to brush up on their grammar. It's not Kreature.
vinterse chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
Hey, great fic, keep up the great work! I really enjoyed reading this, and I'd love to see more! Update soon!
Wolf Maid chapter 3 . 8/25/2004
Wonderful job! I love Snape's portray him perfectly!

Arica Princess of Rivendell chapter 3 . 8/24/2004


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