Reviews for Why So Shy, Tamao?
Loner Mistress chapter 7 . 6/28/2008
good story, update soon. but one question...this is a haoxtamaoxlyo fic right? so who is she going to end up with in the very last chapter? or is going to be where she ends up with one guy in the very last chapter and there is an alternative chapter after that where she ends up with the other?
yo wuz up chapter 7 . 6/6/2005
I love your story!... UpDAte soon I'm going crazy
RueNeko chapter 7 . 4/24/2005
Wai! It seems that last time I forgot to review! Well... Here it is. . I'm reviewing! YAY! I must ask... Are you planning on updating? I love you kawaii fanfic! Hao-chan as a chibi is so adorable! I love Hao/Tamao fics more than any other! (Even Hao/OC.) I even like Anna in your fanfic!(Which is strange because most times I don't like Anna at all. O_o )

*puppy eyes* Update soon please! _
Akizushi chapter 7 . 10/11/2004
nice fic! I like Lyo! But why did Tamao get flirty...? Nyways, your fic is really great! Chill!
cheeeeeeeeze chapter 3 . 7/20/2004
Onii-chan brother
yatsura chapter 6 . 7/12/2004
Great story! Hao/Tamao fo~eva!

And isnt yakisoba fried noodles

soba buckwheat noodles

They make something called yakisoba pan, fried noodle bread, I guess...some kind of sandwich maybe? I saw it in an anime called Da Capo..

I don't really think that pancakes or pizza would be put into more bread...

panbread(like in spanish! IRONY!)

anyways loved your story!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2004
You don't have to listen to my crap critque but whatever...

(O)nee-sama/san/chan would mean sister...

otoru seems to mean to be inferior

I think ototo means little brother

isnt it 'souka' or 'sou desu ka' that means 'that's right'?

'no' is supposed to be spelled iie or you can say iya instead

and I think to stop is yamero or yameru or yamete

sorry about this...Me likes Hao/Tamao
watashi no baka chapter 2 . 7/12/2004
I thought onii-chan was for older brother and ojii-san was for grandfather...and ohaiyou is spelled ohayou (everywhere I looked anyway)

I don't think 'chan' is meant to be used with guys, mainly for girls, maybe if it's an older person and a tiny boy or something...try -kun (like maybe hao-kun)or sumthin...

isn't gomen (nasai) sorry? And weird thing is I never hear anyone use aishiteru in animes, but they might use daisuki! or suki!

Sorry if I'm too critical, it's just what I learned or sorry if someone already meantioned this...- -' sumimasen! *bows lowly (*ahemjapanesestyle) but hao-"chan" scares me a little...
Dastardly Intent chapter 2 . 6/25/2004
i really like your fic so far, it has really good character devolpment. i just wanted to comment on ur definision of "-chan" your right about what it means but its used for a girl, so when u wrote that Hao wanted Tamao to call him "Hao-chan" i think you called him a girl lol.

~Saphire Eyes91
Dastardly Intent chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I really like your story so far, and i like Lyo too. to help with your confusion with HoroXTamao fics (which i personally am a fan of) the reason i like them is probably the reason you said for why it doesn't make sense. heh confusing? yeah well...sumtimes the best couples are the ones whose people are complete opposites. hope i helped

~Saphire Eyes91
Kirume chapter 6 . 5/17/2004
WOW LONG CHAPTER!
heeh omedetoo drake~
you did it!
you updated~!
Yoh: Nani? He wants my ice princess of a fiancée to train him? Does he wanna' die?
i loved that.. MY ice princess..HEHE
-keiko
LadyFiona02 chapter 5 . 5/12/2004
Hey drake, Nice chapter. I'm taking my best guest at what the message is and excuse me if i'm slow getting it. But please update soon.
Alisi
Hannah Kyouyama chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
I NO! OMG Y DID THEY CHANGE HAO'S NAME TO ZEKE! WHAT'S THERE PROBLEM! I THINK HAO'S A FINE NAME DON'T YA THINK! O BY THE WAY GREAT STORY! GJ!
anonomyous chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
i agree with your 'idiot dubbers'! i hate the fact that Hao's name is changed to zeke! *i will not capitalize the 'z' in zeke. the name zeke is stupid... sorri all u zeke lovers out there, but i do think it's stupid* newayz, love the story, and keep up the good work!
LadyFiona02 chapter 3 . 4/19/2004
Hey Drake. Nice chapter. I wonder who will win though. And lyo? is that the same as Lenny? Tao Ren? I was just wondering. Well update soon.
Alisi _~
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