Tres romantique et drole. I couldn't do the accents :P

Love this fic!

Good story but your translation of Protege Moi is wrong in parts:

L'épidémie qui s'étend The disease that we crave

La fête est finie, on descend The celebration/party is over, you descend/go down

Les pensées qui glacent la raison The thoughts that cloud reason

Paupières baissées, visages gris Eyes lowered, gray faces

Surgissent les fantômes de notre lit the phantoms/ghosts of our beds

Du taudis qu'on appelle maison Of the slums we call home

Sommes-nous les jouets du destin Are we the toys of fate?

Souviens-toi des moments divins Remember divine moments?

Perdus les rêves de s'aimer Lost dreams of love

Le temps où on avait rien fait The time when we had done nothing

Il nous reste toute une vie pour pleurer We still have a whole life to mourn

Vous valez la peine toutes mes larmes You're worth the trouble of all my tears

hope thats useful to you :)

xxSxx

This was AWESOME! Please continue it. Don't tell me its complete. It has the perfect ending for it to continue. And I really want you to because you add in the perfect awkward and romantic moments. And also your not graphic but all the tension is there.

Beautifully done! Nny and Devi were so in-character and the plot moved well without going too far...*wonders if that made sense*.

good story

O. . . cuteness! I loved the mental pictures of Nny and Devi in the theatre together. . .

(Foregin films rock. XD)

Want to know what's awesome? (Besides the story, I mean.) I was listening to Protege-moi while I read this fic. And it was entirely unintentional.

Anyway, I loved the story. I can somehow imagine Nny knowing French...

YAY! mesa luvs the ficcy! hee hee. lovely touching little scene, but not too sappy. very well done, mon amie. french is fun, non? and what better way to set romance, even of the homicidal sort? ah, lovely. wow. for being as hyped on caffeine as i am, im actually remaining pretty coherent. go me! keep writing, superior-fic-writer-person! i shall be waiting for more goodness from the good writer person of DOOM! hee hee. go you!

-raven, your friendly neptunian psycho

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

I ABSOFRIGGINLUTELY LOVED IT!

I LOVE PLACEBO!

I LOVE JTHM!

I LOVE YOU!

WHE!

arigatou gozaimasu (for the fanfic!)

-Naomi Sakurakouji (the insomnia factor)

very good. i liked it. wished it was longer though. your good at writing. i still wished it was longer *shrugs off the feeling of loss* anyways. it was very good and i wished it was longer you already knew that and now for something you probably didnt know,

the desciption of the two teens was way too much! it was very odd but still very good. one more time i wished it was longer. ok im done wasting ur time.

best wishes and i wish it were longer.

cheesecracker

aw, devi and nny - soulmates in the jhonen universe

*swoons at brian speaking french* isn't he lovely?

hmm, victims of pretty, pale bois with spiky hair and dark impulses - what could make for a better fic? french is lovely, thank you for the translation - cute fic *waves*

M... That was well-written. And surprisingly refreshing. Like Sierra Mist.

Nice job. I liked that it didn't end with them getting back together but more with a bittersweet anti-climax. Like most foreign films! XD Anyway, very well written, gonna add it to my faves list.

~Ishuzu

That was so good!It was well written and I could picture everything that was happening.I know this probably was a one shot but can you maybe...write more chapters?Please?

Okay anyways I really like this fanfic!So keep up the good work!

Mwa ha ha... that was quite the yummy one-shot. Very delicious, if I do say so myself. Ash is much pleased with your mad talent. I was on the edge of my seat there when he pulls her into his row. Ho-boy.
Wonderful writing, by the way. You impress me muchly - the way you handle Devi and Nny's relationship is madly awesome. I'm not much of a fan of it, either, but you make it lovely.
Much love,
~ash.