Reviews for Makeshift Endings
Concolor44 chapter 9 . 11/8/2013
Since you haven't updated this in eight years, I'm going to assume you're all done.


Don't know if I could handle much more of it. You're simply WAY too good at 'dark'.
Concolor44 chapter 7 . 11/8/2013

This is the most morbid one yet. I hope you've got the monkeys off your back, man.
Concolor44 chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
I suppose that if anything could bring the Batman to the point of killing, that would be it.
Concolor44 chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
Eh ... don't think she would have LET him do that to her, but what do I know?
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 11/8/2013

When you said GLOOMY, you really meant it, didn't you?
janedoe091170 chapter 3 . 8/23/2006
Even though the previous two were, I felt, a little overly cliche and too dark, I really did like this one- especially because of the Batman park. Digging the grave with his hands...oh, god, that was GOOD.
bellecatastrophe chapter 3 . 1/28/2006

i guess all of these are thats kinda me. if you like this stuff, check out when the chance arises (when i post it) and some other stories i'm gonna post. kudos
LM22102 chapter 9 . 8/19/2005
You person!

I totally love you! I finally found someone thats kinda like me!

[counts off her fingers]

We're both beautifully insane;

Did I hear you say you dont like Starfire?

Oh and BB's immaturity?

Raven is the coolest.

Something else I forgot.

Andd! You rock as a writer, props and bunnies.
Lady Shalafa chapter 3 . 8/1/2005
Another good one! Llamas out.
Lady Shalafa chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
I liked the ending.
CrimsonFire490 chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
that was was really good, but in that weird way inwhich you probably meant for it to be when you wrote it. In some way that was a happy some keeps me thinking...excellent writing
BloodCri chapter 9 . 6/2/2005
Oh man that was sad...Another great ending! please write more soon!
flyingpiggies chapter 9 . 5/14/2005
Never fear, for the much belated review is here, personally delivered by flyingpiggies! Heavens, my daunting pile of homework nearly devoured me and I narrowly escaped! And what's the first thing that I do (besides eating some chocolate)? Why, review you story of course! Interesting take on the Raven-Robin bond using Raven's point of view. But how ever shall Raven go on with the gaping hole left over from Robin's death? I say, it must be like trying to live with my much preferred snack or without your story updates, which have been scare of late. Has there been an attack of the kitchen table in the world of Chocolate Curlz which requires all of your attention? Hopefully not, but I send marshmellow peeps, the archnemisis of the much hated table, Pray you update in the good morrow, ere I wither away. Ahem, told you I was busy on the homework, reading nearly all of Macbeth leaves me stuck in old english mode. Well, may the peeps and chocolate save you from the wrath of the table though flyingpiggies will send reinforcements if need be. Tally Ho.
Strixvaria chapter 9 . 4/29/2005
lol, that was a good one, and the end was funny, bye
Strixvaria chapter 8 . 4/29/2005
hey, that was good again, but really sad, and i've felt like that lately, not that my friends tried to kill me, but they've been mean enough to murder me on the inside, bye
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