Reviews for 100 breaths
lectricity chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
nice! the body of it is quite steamy but the transition to the sweet ending was very good. I liked the idea that Freesia was a bit bewidered at what she was doing.
Dark Saviour chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Nice! onigai motto motto of these two!
movyfyhugk chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
you need to write more of jubei-chan please
Ochiba-san chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Hmm, I dunno if someone's told you this yet or not, but her name's Freesia, not Felicia. .

I know it seems like a shallow opening comment and like I didn't even bother to read the piece, but I did read it. I like your writing style and how the first three paragraphs are divided between the views of the two characters. It's nice organization, clean cut. I like it. Also the confusion of Jiyu's status makes a clear picture of the blur of battle and the possibility of distroted interior monologue. "...Nothing but heart in all her movement..." says that her mind is elsewhere. Hmm... I think this could easily be followed up. Way to go.
Gladiel chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
This is very nice. :)
loco moco chapter 1 . 5/17/2004
This is the only jiyu/felicia fic out there! the world of fandom needs more! please continue.
Andyzero chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
I meant, it's spelled Ayunosuke. My bad.
Andyzero chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Nice, very nice. Could use some work on spacing between words, but this is definitely a start.
One thing, though. The little boy is _Annosuke_
Koinosuke is the name of Annosuke's father, from the first season.