Reviews for I do or I don't
Angel LeeAnn chapter 3 . 6/10/2004
This may sound horrible, but I actually care more about Dan than Cliff. EEK! Don't get me wrong, if this was happening in real life, I would be much more concerned about the kid, but since this isn't reality...poor Dan.
yeesha-greenapple chapter 3 . 6/9/2004
hey. this is my best one yet! i kan't wait to see wut happens! great story man!

parapapapa..I'm Loving It...lol
Em chapter 2 . 6/8/2004
Heya! Good fic! Keep it up! CliffhangerBad. Lol. J/J. I like cliffhangers. There suspensful. Up-date soon!
anatidaephobiac chapter 3 . 6/6/2004
No! don't kill him! Cliff is cool... he should get majorly grounded and all, but don't kill him...

update soon!
britt chapter 2 . 5/21/2004
Love it update soon,
oh, and it has to be Dan!
anatidaephobiac chapter 2 . 5/17/2004
i think you're doing a great job... just a few things i noticed...
when you introduced zoe and dan to the people being investigated, you had them say, "hi, we're the fraud investigators."
They wouldn't say that... they'd say "we're from the insurance company" so as not to arise suspicion.
Also... there are no Las Vegas stories... That's like Zoe's trademark thing in the show...
"You know, I remember once when I was a _(insert job) in Vegas, I _(insert story)"
Basically, make up a pointless story to help solve the case...
Which also leads me to believe that it's not that you forgot the Vegas stories, but that there just hasn't been the right moment for them...
Anyway, awesome job. You did really well capturing the characters. Update soon!
strongmedluver chapter 2 . 5/15/2004
omg! that wuz sucha good chap! ah i loved it! dude i really hope you post the next chap s0on! great job!
::KaThErInE::
Angel LeeAnn chapter 2 . 5/13/2004
Wow, a lot was going on in this chapter. Of course, the Zoe-and-Dan scenes were my favorite. Lol. I hope an update is just around the corner!
ZoeandDan2gether4ever chapter 2 . 5/13/2004
OMG! You are evil! JK. I really like this story and I want it to continue...as in now! Evil person for leaving an evil cliffhanger! Continue this stroy, please? With sprinkles and a cherry on top?
WalkerAlex4lyfe chapter 2 . 5/10/2004
i liked it. cant fro chapter 3
Sixty Five Roses chapter 2 . 5/10/2004
Hi,
I liked it but there are few things I wanted to say:
First, Cliff is 12 years old, and unless Melissa is older than him, it's not very reasonable that she's not a virgin. I'm saying that there are no 12 years old girl who have sex, but judging from the person Cliff is, I don't think he would hang up with this kind of girls.
Also, Hannah is too young to talk the way she does. Usually, 8 years old girls doesn't complain about their abssesive friends. I don't even think they know what the word obssesive means. I don't say that Hannah is stupid, but she's not that smart to say that kind of stuff and talk like someone her brother's age. The rest was great.
I can't wait for what is going to happen in the woods. It's like in "the Blair witch" LOL.
Love,
Maayan
WalkerAlex4lyfe chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
i luved it! cant wait for chapter 2
yeesha-greenapple chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
wow gurl. i dont know what to say but wow. i kannot wait for u to finish the story gurl! wow again! ur amazing! pls update more often i kannot wait!
Sixty Five Roses chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Hi,
It was awsome! I liked the part where Zoe stopped Dan and the description of the lipstick all over his face... I'm totaly waiting for more. Go Zoe and Dan!
Maayan
Danielle Anderson chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
I like it, your writing's good; please update soon.
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