|Reviews for Seeing Beyond the Veil|
| Larisya chapter 21 . 7/5/2012
You harbour a disturbing belief that the entire human race is homicidal...
| Larisya chapter 17 . 7/5/2012
This is unbearably sweet.
| Larisya chapter 15 . 7/5/2012
Oh no. Daren's doomed!
| Larisya chapter 12 . 7/5/2012
I am rather annoyed at Hermione, actually.
| Larisya chapter 11 . 7/5/2012
| Larisya chapter 5 . 7/5/2012
Visions suspicious much? What'll happen there?
| Larisya chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
I thought it was Ginevra? And, lesson plan? Dark Mark?
| Larisya chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
Wow, everything likes Daren!
| Griffin Raven chapter 23 . 3/3/2012
I totally loved what you have done with this story so far but
I really do love the changes that reunited father & son has
brought to Hogwarts and the reconilisation of stronger bonds
of friendshipship between Daren, his former friends as Harry
but also his new friend Draco.
I can hardly wait to find out just what might happen next in
this story...despite that either real life or the muse has
opted to run away...that you might at some point aid more to this story, which is why I've added it to my list of favorite
| Griffin Raven chapter 5 . 3/2/2012
Hmm...since Daren/Harry is actually Severus's son and has it
seems has someone of his family's magic already awaken whilst others haven't. But whilst he's no longer a clone of James Potter, but was Daren/Harry left with any evidence of Potter family magic?
I've always thought that all muggleborns are simply descendants
from squibs who have long along left the wizarding world and thus no longer remember there former roots. Or it could be that when two squibs marry that produces a magical child. But there must be a reason why Petunia wasn't magical yet Lily was
magical...so I'd say that Petunia was probably a squib?
Anyway Daren/Harry, doesn't really act that much differently than he did as when he was "Harry Potter" apart from the lack of familiarity with his friends...so why do I sense that Ron's
going to be a problem for Daren/Harry if he's sorted into Slytherin?
| Griffin Raven chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
With young Daren/Harry finally learning the truth about himself
& his parentage...despite how James did treat Severus whilst
at school he did know that Harry/Daren wasn't his son. Yet it can't be denied that James did make Harry/Daren his heir & he also did die in an attempt to protect both Lily & Harry/Daren.
So that must count for something. Hmm...with Daren/Harry being
the heir to Potters but also to Severus Snape...he must certainly become a very wealthy young man upon his majority?
I am surprised that Daren/Harry's patronous form hasn't changed
from being a stag (Prongs) since he learnt the truth about Severus being his father? Unless that sort of thing doesn't happen, I know it has happened in some stories. Also if Daren/
Harry is a polyanimagus - but does Severus have an animgus form I wonder?
| 2lip123456789 chapter 9 . 1/2/2012
I love the pickled ron Idea! you are a genious!
| 2lip123456789 chapter 7 . 1/2/2012
great so far please continue it!
keep it up,
| 2lip123456789 chapter 5 . 1/2/2012
love the new powers!
keep it ip!
| 2lip123456789 chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
this is a great fic, i hope you continue it.
don't make it a daren and heromoine pairing. Darren/daphne greengrass would be better!