Reviews for Seeing Beyond the Veil
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 8/5
it seemed rushed and not a lot of details for each scene
Loveless150050 chapter 14 . 2/9
I just wish the chapters were longer
Loveless150050 chapter 13 . 2/9
I love the story!
Loveless150050 chapter 11 . 2/9
Wow! So Tom never forgot Daren, Darens image like how he loos isn't going to Chang right just his magic?
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
Why is snape being such an ass after finding out the harry is his kid. his main reason for hating the kid was he was james son but he isnt so what reason does he have now. Also why the hell didnt dumbles stop snape from screaming at the kid and I feel he came out of it way to easy
misherukuro chapter 23 . 8/21/2014
Interesting and entertaining once I got into it.
Larisya chapter 21 . 7/5/2012
You harbour a disturbing belief that the entire human race is homicidal...
Larisya chapter 17 . 7/5/2012
This is unbearably sweet.
Larisya chapter 15 . 7/5/2012
Oh no. Daren's doomed!
Larisya chapter 12 . 7/5/2012
I am rather annoyed at Hermione, actually.
Larisya chapter 11 . 7/5/2012
Explanations abound.
Larisya chapter 5 . 7/5/2012
Visions suspicious much? What'll happen there?
Larisya chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
I thought it was Ginevra? And, lesson plan? Dark Mark?
Larisya chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
Wow, everything likes Daren!
Griffin Raven chapter 23 . 3/3/2012
I totally loved what you have done with this story so far but

I really do love the changes that reunited father & son has

brought to Hogwarts and the reconilisation of stronger bonds

of friendshipship between Daren, his former friends as Harry

but also his new friend Draco.

I can hardly wait to find out just what might happen next in

this story...despite that either real life or the muse has

opted to run away...that you might at some point aid more to this story, which is why I've added it to my list of favorite

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