|Reviews for Loyalties|
| MawVax chapter 20 . 5/19
second time reading! BEAUTIFUL
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/15
That.. Was quite the emotional roller coaster.
I must say, I loved this so much.. Zoro/Luffy is seriously so good, and the way you wrote it was just- YES. It was sad but sweet and I almost cried here and there, and there's only been a handful of fics on here that make me cry. The was you wrote this - so convincingly, with the characters forced to act of of character - really had me drawn in and I really couldn't ask for more. This was simply brilliant. I want to thank you for writing this. Wonderful work.
| Tenshi D. Sylviana chapter 20 . 3/4
I hate Nami so much and her stupid interest ruining the stupid moment
| Autumnights chapter 20 . 9/20/2015
I had a one piece dream last week, which is odd because I haven't watched the show in ages, but when I woke up I knew I had to read this story. I forgot how great it is. Definitely a treasure I'll be coming back to for years to come.
| icycoolcatz chapter 20 . 6/4/2015
MMMMMMM beautiful! My only note for this entire story is that you missed a comedic moment!
Nami: five million belli
Zoro: *fakes death
you dangled it in front of me like bate on a line. ughhhhhhhh.
But other then that amazing story telling and you beautifully captured who zoro is as a person, not something I see a lot in fanfictions like this. oddly enough.
| StardustFlames chapter 20 . 5/11/2015
Amazing ** Couldn't stop reading until I got to the end...
| Saravi Boo chapter 20 . 12/2/2014
Great story. Thank you for keeping it gen. Not everyone likes yaoi. I like how well you capture the way Luffy and Zoro communicate without saying much to each other at all. I love that about them. Admittedly, I did have some doubts about the plot when Luffy actually left Zoro to die (albeit briefly), but the rest of the story makes up for those out of character actions. Thank you for sharing this.
| Saravi Boo chapter 7 . 12/2/2014
Love the story but I wanted to let you know that you have an incorrect idea about what a shot put is. A shot put is a disc that is thrown for distance in the olympic sport of the same name. It still works the way you used it in the story but the clay object you describe in your note is called a clay pigeon or skeet and is used in skeet shooting.
| Xeraphina Laurentia chapter 20 . 3/17/2014
* cries from the feels *
This was so touching! * sobs * On a more serious note, I really enjoyed the writing style in the story and the characterization. As a mega-fan of Zoro's, I really enjoyed the way he was portrayed. Excellent work!
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 20 . 12/21/2013
Of course, Zoro... Duh...
It's Amazing..! :D
Though... I almost stop in the middle... Hehe... Sorry...
Not because it's not good, it's kinda frustrating...
I was furious with all the conflict...!
But nevertheless... I finished it...!
It was Nice fic...! ;)
| Tigerwoman188 chapter 6 . 1/16/2013
That operation had me shaking like crazy and cheering Usopp on through the whole thing. As soon as I saw the next point of view I left out a breath that I was holding. That was very well writing!
| Tigerwoman188 chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
I knew Zoro wouldn't kill his nakame :D
| Tigerwoman188 chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
I hope that cloth is armor plate so the blows aren't so bad, I still have faith in Zoro to not kill his nakame!
| Rhirhirhi chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
Hmmm, sounds like its wrapping up - but there are still 15 chapters left, wonder what'll happen next
| Rhirhirhi chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Ok, I'm sure they're not dead,but I'm really wondering where this is heading. I don't think Zoro wouold really do this, but maybe he's planning something.
I think we're going to have one pissed off Luffy pretty soon