|Reviews for Loyalties|
| Saravi Boo chapter 20 . 12/2/2014
Great story. Thank you for keeping it gen. Not everyone likes yaoi. I like how well you capture the way Luffy and Zoro communicate without saying much to each other at all. I love that about them. Admittedly, I did have some doubts about the plot when Luffy actually left Zoro to die (albeit briefly), but the rest of the story makes up for those out of character actions. Thank you for sharing this.
| Saravi Boo chapter 7 . 12/2/2014
Love the story but I wanted to let you know that you have an incorrect idea about what a shot put is. A shot put is a disc that is thrown for distance in the olympic sport of the same name. It still works the way you used it in the story but the clay object you describe in your note is called a clay pigeon or skeet and is used in skeet shooting.
| Xeraphina Laurentia chapter 20 . 3/17/2014
* cries from the feels *
This was so touching! * sobs * On a more serious note, I really enjoyed the writing style in the story and the characterization. As a mega-fan of Zoro's, I really enjoyed the way he was portrayed. Excellent work!
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 20 . 12/21/2013
Of course, Zoro... Duh...
It's Amazing..! :D
Though... I almost stop in the middle... Hehe... Sorry...
Not because it's not good, it's kinda frustrating...
I was furious with all the conflict...!
But nevertheless... I finished it...!
It was Nice fic...! ;)
| Tigerwoman188 chapter 6 . 1/16/2013
That operation had me shaking like crazy and cheering Usopp on through the whole thing. As soon as I saw the next point of view I left out a breath that I was holding. That was very well writing!
| Tigerwoman188 chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
I knew Zoro wouldn't kill his nakame :D
| Tigerwoman188 chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
I hope that cloth is armor plate so the blows aren't so bad, I still have faith in Zoro to not kill his nakame!
| Rhirhirhi chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
Hmmm, sounds like its wrapping up - but there are still 15 chapters left, wonder what'll happen next
| Rhirhirhi chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Ok, I'm sure they're not dead,but I'm really wondering where this is heading. I don't think Zoro wouold really do this, but maybe he's planning something.
I think we're going to have one pissed off Luffy pretty soon
| Rhirhirhi chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Finally, another decent looking story that's actually completed - Do you realise how hard these are to come by?
| KageFuego4 chapter 20 . 9/7/2012
Absolutely amazing... even after the fourth time reading through it
| Red Voident Dragon chapter 13 . 2/11/2012
This chapter! ; o; Holy shi- I've been trying to review for the past day or so but my internet wouldn't load the login window. Dx But! This! This is such an amazing story and each chapter justs keeps getting better and better; Dangit, where has this been all my fanfiction-life?
Either way, I think I felt a tear coming out from the corner of my eye whilst reading the near end part, I mean this-and I honestly mean it-never happened to me from any story I've read in the past on here; and trust me I've read a lot.
This just proves the skills and knowledge on how well you've incorporated everyone's character, seriously everyone was so in character it felt as if I was reading one of Oda's work! (Are you him by any chance...? ) Ahhah just kidding.
| ForbiddenLeo chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Love the story
| zealousfreak27 chapter 3 . 11/14/2011
Did that... really just happen? Only on the third chapter and I GOTTA READ MORE.
| Ppleater chapter 17 . 8/21/2011
"Why is it that you fools don't understand how to die? I mean, really, should I draw you a diagram?"
I really like this line. Lololol