Reviews for To Spite him
Punk Knut chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Hey Fara,
I read it, I've decided to read the entries as they come it. And just coz I'm the judge doesnt mean I cant review, right? lol.
Oh my gosh, that was so sad. I nearly cried at the end. It was sweet and sad.
Its gunna b hard for someone to top it.
And i did make it hard, having to b less than 500 words.
I've read it so you can do anything to it now, its fine k
~Thai.
Mea Lux - Mea Duces chapter 1 . 4/13/2004
Your story is pretty good, but sounds rushed, probably because of that 500 word limit. Please continue writing chapters. What does Ootp mean?