|Reviews for The Phoenix|
| The True Skull chapter 5 . 4/5/2011
A most Interesting chapter well like squilo said it's spelled with an like this Aes Sedai
| boggieman chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Hey girl waz up? i have nothing to do in keyboarding so i am here talking to. im so happy that you moved right down the street from me. i think that is so kewl. pool party at my place in the summer. so how does that sound. now you that i am a fast reader right, well i got this whole story by just moving down the mouse. this is a really kewl storie. and if you are wondering, i really did read your storie. that is how bored i am. i like it. you need to put on some new ones thow. email me later or go on line later 2night because i will be on and probaly chubs will be too. well see you on monday and if not, see you during the week then. kk well g2g have fun on your week off and if you have any exams good luck with them. ttyl. bb c ya
| avandoraldera chapter 5 . 9/6/2004
Good story. Question, did you use pride and predujice for the wedding? No matter you should keep going. I send this so you shall for you promised, and I hold you to it.
| Squilo Sedai chapter 3 . 5/21/2004
yay! another great chappie. well done about adding how jo came to high school and the 50 year old thingy. well done adding logain and the tower coup to everything, along with teh fluted BF rod. alot of people cheat out and just say the 'grey towers' and say their story is in the fourth age. yay! nice work and update soon
| boggieman chapter 1 . 5/13/2004
hey girl waz up have u herd any thing on katie yet? i need 2 no if she saw me or not because its really bugging me to death. well g2g teacher. im hunger buh bye.
| Squilo Sedai chapter 2 . 4/26/2004
ep! we need more reviewers i need next chappie. great story! hope you continue it. i recommend adding a little more of how jolyn came to the highschool, how she disguised herself and such, i mean ppl dont just randomly join HS out of thin air? also, for an ironic twist, have jolyn inform her friends that shes over 50, ther reactions would be...humourous or interesting as my friend verin would say. last thing is that Aes Sedai is spelled with an "a" not Aes Sedi