I've like the idea of them being enemy in reverse and all the other ideas too just like the one where they have to work together. It could have been the first part of a two-parts story. But guess that wouldn't happen anyway sooner. But nonetheless thank you for sharing with us.

That one was nice.

I think now what happened in that sort of dream Cloud had in previous chapters.

Wait. What? When, how? Lol. At least he didn't end up in a military camp that's pretty good for me so far.

A bit confusing but let's see what happens.

Cloud is... a little weak here... it's weird

i love it
please update

Nice story. I think its a fainting concept how Cloud i sent to a parallel universe that is so different yet so familiar. You did a good job of rendering the difficulties and confusion caused by such an event. Good job!

OMG this was an amazing story! You're writing is absolutely wonderful and captivating! Hope you update soon!

Great story hopefully this is not abandoned or discontinued. Waiting for an update

Please keep writing this story...it is so much interesting and I wanna know more about how the relationship between Sephiroth and Cloud can development. Please don't give up...please

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I love how the relationship between seph and cloud slowly develops.

First time reading this, and I was enthralled. I kept reading chapters by chapters. It's truly a beautiful story. Plus, I do love the concept of different dimension. It was great reading this, I had fun!

I love were you stop your story here:

"He held out his hand, still not looking away. Sephiroth reached out and slipped his hand in his, grasping it. Cloud returned the pressure, the warmth and pressure coming from the other man giving him a sense of comfort and hope. Yes. It was possible."

Hmm, I really am hoping you continue with the next chapter (23. Ch.22). I'm very excited to know what happens and how this will end.

Hello There!

Now I just read this whole thing in one go and aside from various plotholes you already explained away with your ANs, it was a very enjoyable read! Thanks for writing this all these years!

It's too bad really that Reno has been made into a puppet. I normally really like him. He's kind of like Zack, just more stupid. XD

Now I'm really curious as how the relationship between Cloud and Sephiroth will unfold. Your description of the development of the dynamics between them is very convincing and exciting!

I hope you keep writing! Go for it!

Greetings, flayne