Reviews for Dégager: The Saiyajin Pet
Guest chapter 10 . 6/6
This is just too amazing to be put into words...

Just...such an amazing piece of art...depicting saiyajin in the new perspective. Totally awesom...
hello chapter 10 . 5/29
I literally just found the story and I'm geeking out about it and I really want more to this! is there any possible way for you to ever update or have a sequel to The Story please please I love it so much
Glon Morski chapter 10 . 2/25
I must say, this was one Hell of an amazing story. And given that I am not a big fan of the GokuXVegeta pairing (I prefer them in a rival/friend-relationship, to be honest), that means a lot. I loved the setting, the plot in itself was very interesting and the story in itself was extremely well written. I can only hope you still continue to write, because if not, it would be a great waste.

Overall, there's nearly nothing that I didn't like in your story. It was really great.

Howevr, you read right, I said 'nearly'. There was one thing that didn't sit quite well with me, and that was what followed Yamucha's murder. I mean, alright, it was it was explained in the epilogue that Kakarotto took it as a 'test' from his 'chosen' as part of the courtship. I also realize he isn't human in this fic (and doesn't consider himself human or anything like that). Still, throughout the story, you portrayed him as the same Kakarotto/Goku we know from the series, one who'd rarely kill willingly and even rarer if he could avoid it. He even hesitated to agree when Vegeta asked him to kill. Plus, you portrayed the matter really in a way that made it look like Vegeta was using Kakarotto and, misunderstanding of courtship or not... I kinda thought Kakarotto would eventually find that out. That he'd been used, I mean. Because really, no matter what, the fact remains that what Kakarotto perceived as a test he'd been expecting during courtship, it was no such thing. Vegeta didn't do it to test Kakarotto's capacity as a future mate. He used him like an obedient animal to do a dirty deed. He took advantage of him. You yourself portrayed it that way in Vegeta's thoughts when he had doubts. I was kinda hoping you'd go on with that. Sadly, you bypassed the whole issue. It kind of made me feel like you took the easy way out 'to get this over with' or something. Not to say you handled it poorly. You didn't. But... it WAS slightly disappointing, especially after that big insistence on Vegeta's part in chapter 9 that he was taking advantage of Kakarotto, using him etc. But I digress. Maybe as a saiyajin, Kakarotto wouldn't have cared either way why exactly he'd been sent to murder someone.

Other than this little thing (which I went on about as if it was a gigantic deal, I know... I apologize... I just tend to always have more to say when criticizing than when I thought something was actually done well *sigh*), I absolutely loved this fic. Thank you for sharing it.

Sincerely,

Glon Morski
jj chapter 10 . 2/7
re read still love very nice story and the part at the end with the detective and the store keeper is probably one of my favorites
jj chapter 10 . 11/17/2014
i love the 'matchmaking services' part that was great but i don't like that you killed yamcha however it was a really good fic nicly done
Flaming Flamingo of Faggotry chapter 5 . 9/29/2014
I just loved this ch. it touches this and that, we finally get to see what Vegeta's house is like, more about Goku's abilities, the servants and how Goku feels about Vegeta. I feel this ch especially shows that V is kinda of a lovable ass, but I would like some form of sass from Goku now and then. Also V seems more of a straight character in this witch is very odd for a yaoi story, and by "STRAIGHT" I mean V doesn't so a great interest in Goku aside from the fact that he's not human but looks some what like it and has unque capabilities. True there are the dreams but as far as it goes. Normally this might/would be a bad thing but i believe this adds a new spin on things but I'm also hoping that something happens, but it should be earned. I don't V to just wake up one day and be all "I'm in love with the ape man in the garden" and you don't seem to want that either so all in all Great story so far.
Flaming Flamingo of Faggotry chapter 4 . 9/29/2014
Well this was quite the ch. I loved the embarrassment part, reading it and imagining it had me laughing, But now i wonder how does the red ape bathe? does he just jump in the pond? or does he lick himself, i'm so curios also hoping for something along the lines of Vegeta bathing him, ah i'm such a naughty flamingo. Loved the ch.
Flaming Flamingo of Faggotry chapter 3 . 9/29/2014
Well this was definitely different than the others seemed more rushed well not the exact word but whatev's, it's like you had a small idea and wrote it up, it was a good idea but it seemed like a filler ch. well I still liked it.
Flaming Flamingo of Faggotry chapter 2 . 9/29/2014
I love it but i feel tortured because of that very last part about the wet dream, I know it'll be hot once it actually happens and I greatly enjoy the bonding but UGH! You don't have to be so cruel!
Flaming Flamingo of Faggotry chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
OOK ok okk, this was amazing, a little confusing about what Goku looked like, but figured out that it was SS4 Goku and not normal Goku. Great descriptions, you really did a great job of making Goku very exotic and strange but still totally hot, or is that just Goku in general? I love Vegeta you really got him down. Many parts had me fanboying out so yeah thumbs up, LOVE IT!
panthera master chapter 10 . 5/12/2014
Hollyyy fuuuuuk...this is mindblowing!
Firstly, i feel kind of mad at Vegeta for sending 'inocent-scratch-or not so inocent' Kakarot to kill Yamcha.
And poor Bulma...

ah, but, aither way...the ending is great, and They live happily ever after...(only for KakaVege tough )

Nice fic man!
That Rude Fox chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
What an enticing little tale. I thoroughly enjoyed every moment of it (Poor Yamcha! But all's well that ends well), and it was a true breath of fresh air.
DevoraDeath chapter 8 . 5/10/2013
luv it!
Trinity Stark chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Beautiful story I loved it 3
Naooki chapter 10 . 4/5/2013
Mee encantooo. Super tierno el final.
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