Reviews for Long time, No see
blueyblonde chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
i love it
Stina Whatever chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
lol
Bokormen chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Really liked this story, it was funny. Might have been fun to have a sequel of some sort... See Kev and Jess again... and maybe let them accidentally in on the secret. :P
pain in the mikta chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Cute! Very enjoyable! :-)
smithcrafter chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
Good story. I liked the idea of Jack squirming while his old friends told stories about him, described his long hair, called him "Jackie", etc. I think there could have been a little more angst. The sentence about "the man they knew didn't have so many scars," was good, but I think it would have been even better if there had been some mention in the story about them SEEING the scars, and their first reactions to them.
Reius Devirix chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Hey! This is really good! Funny and I liked the perspective you put it into.
Dawns Heart chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
It was really funny. Great story!
gategirl13 chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
great story!
myeerah chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Fun. :)
the.forsaken.dumpster chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
Yep. it's funny.

clevver too.

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NotJana chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
That was really funny! I like your humour, especially Jacks thoughts (well, this way of writing anyway)!
gaul1 chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
nice
kazechyme chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Funny and sweet... The Colonel's thoughts were interesting to read and I hope you write more to this!
The Fiction Spider chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
THIS WAS FUNNY!
I liked the
“I think ‘alive’ is the word you’re looking for. He looks actually alive for a change.
bbyahoo.com chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
You do have a great imagination. It is a great short story. I challenge you to write more of them. :-)
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