|Reviews for The Incomplete|
| BlackMagicRose7 chapter 3 . 3/23/2014
Good short story!
| rei-intro-rini chapter 3 . 5/22/2012
WOW ! I was totally into the story... You wrote the story beautifully in a dark way... hehe... but shouldn't you give 'ANGST' warning for it though ?
I'm kinda confused about Kagome n Naraku's feeling for each other...
| EnderSweetie chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
O_O killed me with the evanescence quotes but IT WAS wunderbar!
| x.Janele.x chapter 3 . 11/29/2010
Loved it, loved it, loved it! I really would have liked to know what went wrong with her wish though!
| Black Winter Rose Thorn chapter 3 . 7/1/2009
I do enjoy a good Nar/Kags fic. This was one.
| Azhmyr Athena Le-Fay chapter 3 . 12/4/2008
| w0ah chapter 3 . 8/18/2008
wow. this story disturbed me... yet in a good way. it was dark and twisted but thats how good Kagome/Naraku fanfics are supposed to be. Kagomes transformation was written really good. I really enjoyed reading this. watching the battle for dominance, seeing the change in Kagome. it was just great. I would have never read a Kagome/Naraku fanfiction again, if i had not read yours first. you got me liking the pair. theres just something about the pairing thats great. Good job )
| Kura-sama chapter 3 . 4/21/2008
So dark ... yet so beautiful. It fit the song so very well, you were superb in the way you fit the lyrics into the story. I've never read a song fic quite this good. Love it~
| 15lovemeforwhoiam15 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
| joyrid3 chapter 3 . 7/20/2007
I'm surprised he didn't kill Souta...
Anyway, why'd he live in a house with white and pink shades? I just...can't imagine that :)
Your story was one of THE best NarKags I have ever read! I think you were a bit harsh on Kikyo, but not too much to become disturbing. I do hope you write more NarKag!
Thanks for the great read!
| joyrid3 chapter 2 . 7/20/2007
GOD DAMN! I always liked Naraku in a twisted sort of way, but I practically drooling now! I also liked Kagome's response to him and the fact that it's written in first person makes me feel exactly how she does (well, maybe a bit better...) :)
On to the next chappie!
| joyrid3 chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Great work! I love a well written NarKag...especially one where Naraku isn't OOC. You managed to keep his dark character and portray Kagome's inner transformation perfectly! It seems believable and the writing style's great.
| lindajrjt chapter 3 . 5/19/2007
ok...some of that was confusing; but I think I followed most of it. Good story in a sick kind of way as Naraku really can be Horror! Keep up the good work.
| Murasaki Hikari chapter 3 . 12/23/2006
OMG! I loved this story so much! It was rather masacisitc but I like the twist you put into it. I'm definately going to recomend this to all my friends. Atleast, the ones who won't be freaked out by it. I hope you write more like this!
| LynGreenTea chapter 3 . 7/5/2006
that was good