Reviews for Broken Down
aja chapter 2 . 9/18/2005
uh uh. he tried to really kill her this time? that ain't even right.
XSnufflesTheDogX chapter 2 . 5/29/2004
That was great usually everone hurts Ron in storys{which i dont like}but this time it was Kim YaY!Ne way it was good a few errors but it was good
neosun7 chapter 2 . 5/4/2004
That was so sweet! The formatting was a little off, but the storyline was beautiful! I loved it! Great job! _
-Neosun7
jao chapter 2 . 4/19/2004
XD! That was an AWESOME ending! I could so see Drakken doing something like that. Man, so cool. .:claps and whistles:.
jao
jao chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Not bad. n.n The idea is awesome and you did a great job gettin the events and emotions arcoss. Be proud this is great. n.n
jao
soccergurl1990 chapter 2 . 4/18/2004
IT WAS DRAKKEN. Now that's funny. Great story.
Jellylegs1 chapter 2 . 4/18/2004
oh. an interesting twist to the story. i like it.
keep writing please!
Stix89
Whitefang88 chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Nice fanfic so far pls write more:)
soccergurl1990 chapter 2 . 4/17/2004
Wait a minute this is the first chapter in the second chapter. Great story though. Please update soon.
Jellylegs1 chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
oh, angsty.
keep it up.
Ace Lannigan chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
Hmm. Is this a first chapter of a larger story? If so I has started off ok. A few spots where you need to use better "talking" quote things. And I didn't know that Ambulances had Xray equipment, but its fiction so anything is possible.