|Reviews for Still Here|
| lolo.bubbletea chapter 1 . 3/5
how did he die? in the fire or suicide? if it was suicide, did he decide to stay in the fire? I'm sorry, i just don't get it. Great story though!
| yix109 chapter 9 . 4/17/2017
La vas a continuar?
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/10/2015
| AngryReviewer chapter 9 . 8/14/2015
THIS MAKES ME SO MAD!HOW DARE YOU ABANDON THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY! DAMN YOU!
| Jronese chapter 9 . 4/3/2015
And so it never ended :(
| dbzknowitall chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
I really like this story PLEASE KEEP UPDATING
by the way shojin is a buddhist meal so kudos to me
| Hinata-Hime-Starz chapter 9 . 2/12/2014
Awwwww I love this story! Amazing please continue
| KTDLover chapter 9 . 8/7/2013
This story is absolutely incredible!
I know it's been a long them, but I would love to see this story continued.:)
| the-hunger-jaws chapter 2 . 3/25/2013
This is heavy man ...I LOVE IT!
| the-hunger-jaws chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
You know, this is interesting. UPDATE, the world depends on it
| Eikyuu Sonomi chapter 9 . 3/8/2012
You should finish this it's amazing!
| PsychicZai chapter 9 . 6/24/2011
please please please please continue this story omg
| WritingBlues404 chapter 9 . 2/14/2011
Wow, I've read this story a while ago and am surprised to still find it floating around. I believe I read it back when you last updated... but never bothered to review, which I now regret. Your story is amazing and beautiful, truly an original work of art, in my opinion. It expresses so much emotion and really makes you think about that all-important question: Is there life after death? I won't lie, your story has brought me to the brink of tears with those Gohan and Goten scenes and even made me angry when I found that the next chapter would be the "changing point" but there was no update for a few weeks... then months... then years. I would, indeed, love to see an ending to this masterpiece, just as many others would - but I do know what it feels like to have writer's block, not know what to do next, or just plain ol' get bored with the idea. Your story has been, and still is, one of my favourites and I will continue to check in every once in a while to see if anything new has been added.
Hopefully the creative juices start flowing again one day and everything just falls into place like the last pieces to a puzzle.
Well, be seeing you later *smileyface*
| PIKACHU chapter 9 . 2/1/2011
Please write another chapter, and authors notes dont count ! The story is awesome, I love Goten and Gohan stories!
| PIKACHU chapter 9 . 1/23/2011
1) TAKE IT FROM GOTENS POV
2)HAVE PICCOLO FIND OUT GOHANS A SPIRIT
3)HAVE THEM WISH GOKU BACK
4)MAKE GOHAN TEACH GOTEN MARTIAL ARTS
5)HAVE GOHAN TELL GOTEN HIS PAST, AND HAVE GOTEN TELL CHI-CHI 'GHOSTS' REAL NAME
6) HAVE HERCULE SATAN START BOASTING HOW HES THE GREATEST PERSON IN THE WORLD AND HOW THE DELIVERY BOY WAS JUST A WEAK COWARD THAT HE HAD TO SAVE THEN HAVE PICCOLO GO THERE AND ALMOST KILL HERCULE BUT HAVE VEGETA STOP HIM
7) HAVE GOTEN FIND A PHOTO ALBUM WITH A PICTURE OF GOHAN AND TELL CHI-CHI THAT THATS EXACTLY WHAT GHOST LOOKS LIKE
THATS ALL MY SUGGESTONS, SO PLEASE UPDATE!