|Reviews for Demons Etc|
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 8 . 9/14/2012
I love this story! It's different from the most fics I've read.
Poor Chrono is stuck in kid form thanks to Aion, Magdalene is still alive, but with memory loss.
Joshua... somewhere and I wonder does he remember Rosette still or did he forget about her?
For now they have to make sure the Magdale order guards Azmaria well and make sure Aion won't know where she is.
I really can't wait for more, please update this story :D
| Angelyta chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
This author is an amazing writer. I've never seen such well-writen plots and character caracterization like hers. Not to mention her AUs(like this one) are amazing.
Awesome story of course, a real shame it's not finished.
| gemiinous chapter 8 . 10/21/2011
hmmm, and now i think you've gone and died again!
brilliant idea, this is really amazing! please update(eventually...?)
| ThexWhitexPhoenix chapter 8 . 12/4/2010
update update update! That's an order! XD
| Shadow-chan93 chapter 8 . 11/4/2010
wow, this story is really good and very well written.
It's a shame that it isn't finished though...
I've discovered your fanfiction because I found an illustration to it by Shizukesa.
It was only a sketch though. I don't know if you still might have some contact to her, but I coloured her pic there:
I haven't gotten a chance to ask her for permission though because she has left deviantArt.
If you still have contact to her, could you please ask her if it was okay for me to post the pic?
| Whispering Lotus chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Your story is really good (_)I really hope you decide to update again. it's one of the best fics I have read until now.
Please, please update again. (._.) Please?
| Selenity Jade chapter 8 . 3/13/2008
Woot, I really like this one. _; I hope you continue it someday! Nice job.
| Sera and Tails chapter 8 . 2/26/2008
I'm so glad that I decided to check out "Demon's Etc" again, only to be rewarded with an updated fic!
I had read and re-read over the years with the hope that you would continue it. As a result, I remember the fic it was before you made recent revisions. I have to say I really did enjoy the part (now removed) where Chrno reunites for the first time with Magdalena, and I do miss it.
However, I am excited to see where this new updated version (also exciting!) takes us. Your CC fic is absolutely exceptional (it was really what made me return to fanfic ona more permanent basis after a long hiatus) and I know that upcoming chapters will be filled with the same quality and beautiful construction as its predecessors.
If I might make a tiny bit of concrit: Watch where you use your all-caps. In a sentence such as this: "THIS was the life." italics could do the job just fine in providing emhasis and would be more appropriate, formatting-wise.
Can't wait to read more!
Tails, of Sera and Tails
| keptein chapter 10 . 8/19/2007
Even if it says (work in progress), are this fic on hiatus? Since, I mean, it's an awesome idea, and I'd love to see more of it.
| Synonymous Brian chapter 10 . 8/4/2007
lol, at first I thought you were going to make Magdalene out to be the bad guy XD I almost stopped reading, but I'm glad I stuck to it, thinking 'How could Magdalene be evil? Maybe Pandemonium is posessing her or something...' And I was right! Hm... looks like you've abandoned it... well, I hope you find the will, determination and creativity cells to continue this! It's such a good fic and it's a shame to see it go to waste...
| Synonymous Brian chapter 2 . 8/2/2007
Yay 100 reviews!
| BittersweetRegrets chapter 10 . 12/7/2006
PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON! BTW, I LOVE your story! It's fabulous and Chrono is SO adorable! -
| Dragoon-Yue chapter 10 . 4/16/2006
You know, (given that Chrono and Magdelena were alone in the country long enough to have built a cottage with a basement and the fact that they have feelings for eachother) it's surprising she did't get pregnant...
Anyway, please update soon!
| Tanwen Whitefire chapter 10 . 2/6/2006
oh.. my. i KNEW she was evil! i just KNEW IT! i loved your clarke kent and lois lane approach, it made me giggle. your writing style, though i do adore it, i find can leave action, fighty scenes a little blurry. but, maybe i'm just not paying enough attention. i do love your attention to detail, and emotions.
btw, i heart this story! _~ i believe i'm going to go read the parallel to it soon.
| Lala chapter 10 . 11/1/2005
Did you die? I hope you didn't! Coome back! I've just read Chrno 5&6 and remembered your story and am SO SO So sad that you haven't updated!
I hate unfinished business!