Reviews for The Flying Papaya Returns
Biddett da Pigeon Stalker chapter 4 . 5/21/2004
aw...you could have dragged out the battle for a few chapters, maybe get the papaya to destroy a few villages...
Well, I suppose there's still that gift, huh?
...UPDATE!:D
A BlackHole chapter 4 . 5/20/2004
I think I'd consider the lethal and uber-mighty HotDog army more of a theat!
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*looks around*
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Um...right, anyway, it was...interesting, to say the least...
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*runs away to rally HotDog Army*
eye.of.the.dragonfly chapter 3 . 5/11/2004
ok...this is wierd...
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IT'S SO TOTALLY AWESOME!
Biddett da Pigeon Stalker chapter 3 . 5/8/2004
A giant flying "unfriendly" papaya? I didn't see that coming! :D
Cool! Can't wait for you to update!
Fionasaurus chapter 3 . 5/2/2004
i liked was very good, soon.
Biddett da Pigeon Stalker chapter 2 . 4/26/2004
Van eating his pillow...how predictable. Lol! Great fic too! .
A BlackHole chapter 2 . 4/25/2004
Flak: That was, um...good
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Lash: Interesting, to say the least. Funny how your pointing out Van's notreallymentioned addiction to Papaya's.
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Adder: Yess, I wonder what Thomass iss planning eh?
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Hawke: A good job on both chapters...
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Sturm: But they should be longer, take more time in writing, a simple job is good, only a loss of description and detail can kill it.
Fionasaurus chapter 2 . 4/24/2004
That was funny.I can't believe Van just left Fiona to clean up his puke after he learned he was the one that did it was good.
Paladin Dragoon chapter 2 . 4/24/2004
ROTFLMAO! o The part about Van's dream was hilarious! And so was when he woke up! XD I was cracking up imagining him with the pillow in his mouth and drool all over the bed...And money fell from the sky? O.O ROTFLAMO! XD XD XD That's awesome! I'm jealous of Thomas...
Zoids-Fan chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Now this is a weird story - I like the comment about Van being as predictable as a Zi-quake hehe. Very fun story to read :)
Maelgwyn chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
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I dont know what to say? This is quite perturbing... and Thomas should get the money *pats Thomas on head and gives him a dollar*
simone chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
it was funny and i liked it
Schubaltz chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
Heh, Heh. Cool so far. Update soon! Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go attack that rabid pile of saurkraut with a hatchet.
Biddett da Pigeon Stalker chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
Lol! Very nice. I'm waiting for more! :)
Paladin Dragoon chapter 1 . 4/18/2004
LMAO, not bad, so far. _ I like the general plot! Anyway, I'll be waiting for more!
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