|Reviews for The Matrix Revolutions Counseling Service|
| TenRose Holmes chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
I needed one of these after the ending of Revolutions. . . and especially after the ending of Mockingjay. It's so true though, us fangirls and fanboys going and getting attached to characters just to have them the majority of the time die. . . *sigh*, it's times like those when I'm happy for fanfiction, and, you know, real life of course. . .
That was enjoyable, nice fic. :)
| CrossoverQueen chapter 5 . 5/7/2005
I LOVE this fic, and so does my sister. I especially like the Wiccan prayer at the end. I went through a phase once where I was intensely obsessed with it. I'm not actually Wiccan, but the love stays. The last line also sounds sort of familiar. Curse my horrid memory that I don't know why.
| Dharke chapter 5 . 3/25/2005
That was a very serious chapter! Beautifully written though. I especially liked that interaction between the caller, Neo and Trinity.
Again the subject of the call has got me thinking. I'll be thinking about this for ages now...
| Dharke chapter 4 . 3/25/2005
You've captured Trinity perfectly! She reacts so convincingly given the situation of the story.
Some of these phone calls are definitely very thought provoking...
| Dharke chapter 3 . 3/25/2005
Hilarious chapter! I really love the ones with Neo in, because you make him out to be so naive and confused! Hahahaha! His uncertainty with the sobbing callers also humours me.
| Dharke chapter 2 . 3/25/2005
Nice chapter involving Mouse. I loved the idea of his food chart, since he went on about Tastee Wheat in the first Matrix film. I also liked the way you described his environment with the lady in red picture.
Mouse's answer towards Trinity and Neo also made me think...
| Dharke chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Hehehe. Really enjoyed the first chapter, especially the interaction between Neo and Trinity. Sad as it is, I really thought it was sweet when Neo was unable to handle the crying females. Trinity's complaint was also well presented!
| Divamercury chapter 5 . 9/27/2004
Awesome story. The first 4 chapters were really funny, and this last was so powerful. I really love this idea...so original! Great job...please continue!
| Elahw chapter 5 . 9/21/2004
I agree with my fellow reviewers. The last chapter is indeed very heartwrenching.
Is it just me or does anyone else find that scene in Reloaded when Neo restarts Trinity's heart really romantic? Most of the people I know found it quite disgusting, but I just reckon it was so sweet to see Neo bend over Trinity like that with so much love in his eyes...
Great story. Please continue
| MistyX chapter 5 . 9/18/2004
You've got me crying, now.
There just so much pain attatched to everything. Their deaths. And what the girl, what YOU, said about that she actually cried for herself- isn't that what we're also doing?
I cry for them, I'm certain of that. I cried my heart out when Trinity first went, and moments later her Lover went to join her. And the look upon his face when he went, that serenity...
He WANTED to die. He truly didn't have anything to live for, with HER being gone and establishing peace upon the planet... bringing an end to the war.
Watching it, I always think that he KNEW he would be joining her. That she would be standing there, in the light, in that seraphim light with extended arms, a smile upon her face and the kindest, blue... shining eyes ever.
Welcoming him home.
And he WOULD find peace.
THEY would. Together.
But I'm also certain that to some extent I cry for myself, as well. For the loss I am never ready to give up, to the pain which I am never ready to give into- although I've found myself succumbing into that small state of plane so many times.
And it's so bittersweet...
They got an ending that they deserved. If one would have lived, nothing had been right. They fought and died with glory, true soldiers of a time when nothing was what it seemed, and the only thing that shone through the foggy mist of reality, truth and lies was their mutual love.
That love which we fans fight so hard to protect, we still do.
Isn't this fic an attempt of that?
Just reassuring is that they DID get an happy ending? That they were joined together again? That they didn't die to be mortal coil, rather immortal souls of a time lost and found?
You tell me. But I guess you're trying to do that with this story.
This is the end... fight. Protect it. TREASURE it.
If it's anything at all, hit me back at thematrixhasme :)
Keep up the good work and keep original pieces like these coming!
| MistyX chapter 4 . 9/18/2004
God, that was sweet. The interaction between Neo and Trinity, I mean. I just go all happy smiley faced, LOL
And the whole girl's talk... God. I realized that's what I've been so afraid of as well, for a long time now. Exatly those things, but I've never been able to put them into words...
so thank you.
For doing it for me :)
[collapses from the sadness and sweetness]
| MistyX chapter 3 . 9/18/2004
I love the sweeteness between the "gone" Neo and Trinity, it just seems natural... and it gives us something to hope for as well ;)
| MistyX chapter 2 . 9/18/2004
It's the same for this chapter!
Althought you might want to laugh, since the whole situation is one you could laugh to, you just don't since there's a sense of tranquility, a reality sense, hanging around it...
It makes it intresting, it really does :)
| MistyX chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
The funny thing about this story is, although it's pretty AU and a parody on its own, it is EVERYTHING but a comedic parody. It is actually intresting to read, and it instead of giving you a sense of humor, gives you a sense of that it COULD actually happen...
Weird, huh :)
| Kaileikehe chapter 5 . 9/18/2004
I love this! Put a little of Switch and Apoc in there, p'ease?
This fic really flows, just wonderful. Hey, maybe you could have someone do a prank call? Heh? _