|Reviews for Belly Down|
| bartlettpear chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
Holy crap, I read this a decade ago and still recognize it and apparently still remembered the title correctly. This was a cool moment in time you captured. I felt your portrayals and dialogue were both true to character. Thank you for writing!
| MLeggyLeaf chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Um, so what's exactly orochimaru wanna say in the end? Belly?
| Metallover130 chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Ooh, that last line made me shiver. :D
| Moth Gypsy chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
c: i can see how much you've improved over the years, while this was still enjoyable, your new stuff is loads better. but i love anything with these two, and sadly there is very little of it, so x:
| timme chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
orochimaru is nice here. i like the fact that he can appreciate solitude and his own company. and nature most of all. so many people are encumbered by what jiraya deems so important (girls, not toads), that they can't appreciate a nice forest clearing and a piece of snakeskin. i'd rather be content with orochimaru's way than jiraya's remedy of chasing after a pretty girl over and over again (well, i am a girl, but you get my meaning).
| Welcome to the World chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
I thought this was slightly humorous...I guess you'll have to find this funny, if you approached a "loner" before. :/
| Kyoshi7989 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
frog pornography, lol.
liked the ending alot.
| darklace15 chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Wow. The both of them were perfectly captured. Completely different, but somehow able to converse. And everything Orochimaru says, knowing what happens to him later...it's a little creepy. But it makes it completely plausible. Bravo.
| Emerald Gaze chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
"Not all snakes crawl belly-down."
...really and what snake would that be!...orochimaru?...but this does kinda makes sence it would explain allot if it was part of the show! good job on it!..but seriously what sanke doesnt!_!...
| Kohaku Kawa chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
This is amazing! I love the connection between the snake cast off and Orochimaru's technique. It's so true!
I'm faving this. It's something I want to be able to read whenever I feel like a good story.
| azab chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
i liked it
| niver chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
| SeparatedCow chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Perfect. This fic is absolute perfection.
| Sariachan-KokiriLeaf chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
A friend of mine told me that this was a good fic, and it actually was! :)
| Viiraruu chapter 1 . 6/3/2006