Reviews for End of the Dreams
allitersonance chapter 8 . 12/4/2005
Not the best grammar, but it's pretty good still. I think most people have Harry's Aunt Petunia care about him before his Uncle Vernon, but it's a nice twist. And Harry's trying to die, even though he thinks it's just sleep... haha. 8/10
Seni-x chapter 8 . 12/4/2005
OMG! Is he dead now? He can't be dead! You can't let him die!

Great story! love it! Continue ASAP, pls

Why isn't the Order there yet? Cause it's at the end of book 5 right of not? Is it after the 6th book or ... Please verify that, or else it's a bit confusing about the time-line we're in.

Oh yeah, poor Lily! I don't really think that's possible in the books (that bad at least) but maybe a tiny bit of it is.. I don't know...

kikyohater404 chapter 7 . 9/14/2004
Petunia is such an evil witch!But good story
Joslin chapter 7 . 8/22/2004
Oh NO.. poor harry. what's going to happen? Plz update soon!
chips challenge chapter 7 . 8/19/2004
Oh no, I hope Harry gets some help from somewhere. He's obviously not going to get any from his family or maybe Vernon will call someone. ) Maybe Professor Snape )
chips challenge chapter 6 . 8/19/2004
That was interesting hearing so much from Petunia's point of view. It's a view we don't usually see a lot of in fan fiction. I was amused especially when she was thinking that Dudley could be any size she wanted him to be :)

I had a hard time reading some of it just because there aren't many spaces. My eyes get tired reading large paragraphs. The English looks great. I got somewhat confused with the previous chapter.

I'm off to read your next chapter.
kokomocalifornia chapter 7 . 8/19/2004
really good update!

the order have to come save him now!
Golden Scroll chapter 3 . 8/18/2004
Hey I read three chapters of this, it was a really good idea and quite a good fic, with plenty of xcitement. However it's not really the normal type of fanfic I would go for, that is the only reason I did not read it to the end. However I believe you should always reveiw. So Keep writing and good Luck :)
Ainsley Haynes chapter 6 . 8/18/2004
Hi! I've been reading your story since the day you published the first chapter and I thought it would be nice if I drop these lines to say how much I like your story. Please, keep writing and update soon, I want read more about how Harry will react when he wake up... if he wake up...


kokomocalifornia chapter 6 . 8/17/2004
really good!

please update asap.

ive add u to my fav stories list!
Blackrose chapter 6 . 8/17/2004
This is a great story. I hope Harry's alright. Wish Sirius could come back. He could help Harry. Can't believe they wrote him off in the first place. Where was the Order. I thought Dumbledore had someone watching the whle time. Hope to see more soon. Wish it were Lupin or Snape that came. And that Snape was a little nicer.
you wear me like a complexxx chapter 6 . 8/17/2004
Hey, it's your new beta here. lol. Anyway, hope you have fun on your little trip and kewl story so far. I can't wait to get my hands on the next chapter.
Englishgirl chapter 5 . 8/5/2004
cool story!
Spellcaster Hikaru chapter 5 . 8/4/2004
This story is realy good! _ Chapter 5 seems to be kinda rushed though and at somepoints I can't read it clearly. Overall though good job! _ I hope you update soon.
Joslin chapter 5 . 8/4/2004
Oh Plz update soon. I really like this story. What's happening with Harry? Plz update soon!
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