|Reviews for Pro Patria Mori|
| Andelia chapter 18 . 6/9/2004
Obviously, I haven't been spending enough time at lately.
First of all, congrats on finishing your first fanfic. You should be proud, it's a heck of an accomplishment, especially with a fic this long.
Secondly... Wow. That's pretty much the only word coming to mind right about now. I read the whole thing in one sitting, I just couldn't tear myself away from it. Your AU Lucas is absolutely perfect, exactly as I would have pictured Lucas under those circumstances. The others are also perfectly in character, an amazing feat. I was particularly impressed with the appropriate characterization of Bridger, considering the fact that everyone's instinct is to make he and Lucas close.
In all eighteen chapters, I think that I noticed all of two puny little grammatical mistakes, which weren't even important enough for me to remember and point out. It's really well written, and has great grammar and an incredibly original plot.
Very well done.
| pari106hotmail.com chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Ooh. Love the new name :) "World at War" worked, too, but this is more dramatic :p
| Mar chapter 18 . 5/24/2004
You can consider that you've owned yourself the Oscar to the 'meaniest' fanfic writer in the world.
You're very very very mean.
Ok, I'm not saying that I don't like it... but still...
He was sweet and good and a lot of nice things... sighs.
In the 'critics' I loved the peaceful environment (wrong word, I know, sorry) of the chapter. The beach, the words... beautiful.
Hehe... and I love that Lucas has escaped and gone to the seaQuest (or trying it). It wouldn't has been a nice 6 months, thought.
Oh, and some chapters ago you asked me about what i meant with the comment of your explanation to the war.
I meaned that I liked it, because it was the kind of explanation adecuate for the moment. Meaning, that it was not a 'we good them bad' and it was not also a 'We're not good but there's nothing else better'. It was... er... I can't explain it in english I'm sorry I've this huge lack in english vocabulary.
Saying it simply, It was the answer that fitted the best for the moment and the charachter.
| Fiona chapter 18 . 5/24/2004
So sad an ending, kind of a full circle. I would like to know how Lucas grew up. Please write a sequel, I really enjoyed this
| PhoenixTears80 chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
Too sad! This is crying out for a sequel, you know...
| KatKnits00 chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
I hope you are planning on writting seaquel. You just can't leave it like this, how was Lucas treated in prison? How did he feel about Ford more or less defending him? And all the other questions to numerous to mention.
| liz chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
I don't get the ending...can you explain? email me please.
| pari106hotmail.com chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
Wow! This can't be the end! I totally wasn't expecting this. Such a sudden ending! Leaves me wondering what happened with Braithwaite, wishing we could have seen more of Robert, and wanting to see what life on the SeaQuest will be like now, with Lucas as an ex-military Commander posing as a teen genuis :p I really hope you write a sequel! You just can't leave us like this! ;D
| sara chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
how? how could you do this? the end? but i dont want it to end! poor robert! he always dies! that ending was not *at all* what i was expecting. i wanted there to be at least 50 more chapters...hehe
maybe there can be a sequel? or some snippets?
or maybe show what happened to lucas in prison? just some short little ficlets where lulu's just sitting around thinking about life and robert and kristen...blah blah
YOU GOTTA WRITE MORE! PLEASE! just write about anything and i'll be happy!
it's just so sad...i cant believe it's over...
i'll be waiting for more from you! }:0 and i better see it! 8
| Diena chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
Whoa. Very powerful ending.
And I do hope you write more in the fandom - you're exceptionally talented. :)
| lo chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
I do hope you are planning a seguel. The end is so final for such a good story line. I have looked forward to your postings. Thank you for the enjoyment
| Teresa chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
Wow, totally not what I expected. That was so sad! Very well done though. Excellent. A great take on the SeaQuest storyline from a really original angle.
| Zoe chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
:( THE END...*SOB*
Amazing fic but so sad that it's finished.
So is there going to be a sequal?
Hope to read more of your fics soon 'hint hint!'
| ano chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
That is such a sad ending *cries* poor robbie
| kas7 chapter 18 . 5/23/2004
ah... why did it have to end..
Can't you make my another chapter or something?
But it was very good. Excellent.