Reviews for Lily and James: Their Story of Love
Ily chapter 60 . 4/11
I know that you finished this story ten years ago but I just finished reading it and I loved it you are one of the best writers I've ever seen.
Thank you for the amazing story
imjenny123 chapter 1 . 1/19
Hi! I loved your story, I've been reading and re-reading it over the years now! It is very well written and helps fill up the hole the Harry Potter end has caused. I noticed you said that there is a sequel. What is the sequel's tile? I would love to read it!
Luisa chapter 31 . 12/11/2014
This is very good but i think the potion should have been able to cure more than one person.
Kate chapter 33 . 11/26/2014
Silverfeather222 chapter 60 . 2/8/2014
I like Sirius the most, Halle. I HATE PETER, but I always hate him, of course.
I cried alot when I read the parts about Halle and Grace, and I was soooo happy when Halle was well again.
Your story really was great!
Silverfeather222 chapter 23 . 2/8/2014
Crying... this is so sad...why?
Jamesforeva chapter 24 . 9/28/2013
FROM WHERE; ATI: can't let my father and sister die' iyeeeeeeeeeee
Anyway, I still LURVE yer story
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ;D
Jamesforever chapter 13 . 9/28/2013
James potter wears glasses? I'm not sure but I just know that in this story I'd love to be in Lily's place. To me, James will always be a guy with a fun personality
Guest chapter 13 . 8/5/2013
i think that you jumped into what should of been the main events far too early and therefore wasn't as big or dramatic as you could of made them. second thing, in the early chapter when Halle and Sirius confess their love to each other i thought it was rushed and far too casual. lastly i think that you needed to develop your characters further in the earlier chapters and also establish the setting better and background information in depth. it will definitely improve your story to above average which i personally feel this particular fan fic is at. it would make a good first draft
madworlds chapter 37 . 6/29/2013
One thing I think incorrect is their transfiguring objects into potions. The whole point of potions are that they are difficult to brew. If one could transfigure them then there wouldn't be any point having a Potions class.

That said, I absolutely adore this story, and am constantly re-reading it. It's even motivated me to write my own, so thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
It was very detailed
I would like to say that JAMES WAS KEEPER
You have a natural flair c:
queenofflames chapter 37 . 4/1/2013
I am loving this chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
great chap
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
nice chapter
lily evans 1998 chapter 5 . 3/26/2013
good chap
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