|Reviews for Lavender Violet Rose SaraLee FionaDee Smith|
| Written With The Dreams chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Still a better love story than Twilight.
| Lily the Master of Kitties chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Oh, wow. That's just awesome. I love it. Thanks for writing this. ;_;
| Potatoes4Eva chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
That... Oh my... I laughed so hard. XD That...That made me so incredibly happy. -sighs and wipes tear from eye- I actually have a JtHM "lover-lady" for Johnny. XD I don't think she's like this, though. I am not offended. Silky hair that flows like silky silk? I love redundancy. 3 I think I'm going to start rambling, so...
This made me happy. XD 'Nough said. Sort of. I dunno, things can always be said about everything, because I talk too much and -head shot-
| Zdenko Masque chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
| Dirge for the Dead chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
OH my GOD that is hilarious! I totally agree with you, I hate Mary Sues... are they also known as OCs? And yet I use OCs all the time... but none of them ever believe Dib. Or fall in love with Nny. Ever. General, I know. But this is hilarious.
| Tallest Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
... (laughs hysterically) PHOENIX HATE TEH SUE! HAHAHA! Devi is a GIRL!
| itlookslikerain chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
the funniest thing was the very last line ... and it was glorious
| xXxIchigoBeyondxXx chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
| keeperofcoldtoes chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
This is so amazingly awesome. I like the way you worded things like "I am so deeply crushed, I shall cry. I am crying." It's a great parody. I'm glad that there are people who know how to make others laugh like that. I'm am 'so' NOT offended because your story is so incredibly true!
| Hell's Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
You really portrayed them well!
| Madame President chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
i laughed, because all mary sue's deserve death.
| Ravyn chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
i agree. too many Sues...although i am writing a lightly Sueish story myself. maybe i'll make my lazy but get an account. will u read my stuff if i do?
| Eddi Delaney chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Wow. That is actually pretty accurate. Especially the part about her not being disturbed by the blood. You can't really use the 'strong pushy type' with Nny because he would kill them, so we're stuck with either an OOC Nny or some little whiny bitch for his girlfriend. I've seen ONE decent nny/oc pairing. Either way, I actually thought that was funny, but being a JtHM fan I have a fairly odd sense of humor. Oh well. Keep writing stuff, eh?
| Miaega chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
OMG! i am liek so ofendid. its not my falt taht i hav anorexia, bulimia, depression, bipolar disease, hallucinations, am suicidal, cut myself, that my parents died when I was just a baby, I was left on the streets because I wanted a pony and could ride one so well, am poor, and am not a prep. stop makeing fun of me! wah!
Hahaha! Yes, I'm just kidding. Great parody. It made me laugh.
I have noticed that when Johnny falls in love with some girl that IS NOT Devi, she usually has problems galore. A few exeptions though, because there WAS one that wasn't TOO Mary Sueish, and another where the girl was almost…perfect, and Nny was instantly happy with her. Blech.
This is a great peice of work, and I shall show it to all my friends! Nyah ha!
And I love how you gave the girl the name "Lavender Violet Rose Sara-Lee Fiona-Dee Smith". It suits her, as well as all the other JtHM Mary Sues out there. Plus, it's fun to say.
Being so very happy now that I've read this, I shall give you a mountain of cookies!
*huge truck comes with many cookies in it*
You write good parodies. Write more. I COMMAND you! Nyah ha.
Enjoy the cookies!( And I be sorry for any spelling mistakes here. )
| Kkwy chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
I love it. DEATH TO MARY-SUES!