|Reviews for To Me|
| Mona Koza chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Very nice. :D
| EE's Skysong chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
Oh, I likes that. It's nice.
| Gethorssca chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
This is good, it's prolly how he feels too.
| eleccy chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
This is a good poem, and I think that it is what Roland wants, after all being the last gunslinger would be kind of lonesome. I have an image of him (from your poem) as being like a little kid who just doesn't want to be alone and it's sweet. Anyways, a good write.
| Marcy Bayd chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
like how u summed up Roland's thoughts into a poem. very good.
| dianna chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
good job *hugs* i like it. a lot.
| hoytless chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
I like that you formed it in poetry. . .it gives a different side of Roland, doesn't strike me as the poetic type, but his circumstances are rather poetic (plus there's the whole premise of the series based on the poem).
I however think it's missing one very, very important thing: WHERE THE HELL IS 'KA'? You missed Ka, and that's strange for the most important driving force of the novel.
Good work bud
| Little Ann chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
cool! I love it