Reviews for Blue Eyes and Black Bandanas
Isabees chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Okay. Really like the plot and everything. But I don't think I know an earthling named Thuraya. Lol. But yeah. Nice story. Keep on going. :D
foxy mew mew 3031 chapter 4 . 11/14/2006
Chocohip2000 chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
THis is awesome! I WANT MORE!
pIPPINpIRATE chapter 4 . 5/22/2004
I liked it, but it moved kinda fast. There could have been bigger spaces between the change in time or setting.
Myonly comment, otherwise I must encourage you to keep typing!
Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 4 . 5/20/2004
Oh no! What happened to Raya?
ArcherofDarkness and Callie chapter 3 . 5/10/2004
I LOVE that book! and you know there's a glossary of a ship in the back, KEWL!
*cough* And back on subject...You have a very distinct writing style with lots of Onamotapiea(sound words)
It's very intresting telling the story from this POV. Can't wait for another chapter!
Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
I like it! More chapters please!
Kitty Petro chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
Not bad
Im suprised Amelia let Raya have her cat whit her but hey its your story
You gotta uppdate
The warmest regards
Captein Amelia