Such a bittersweet ending, but so true to the character. Great story.

This is FANTASTIC!

Where's the update

I think I like this because it didn't really have a happy ending. It fits really well with batman.

Wonderfully written! Ending almost made me cry, damn stubborn Batman.

you have no idea how I laughed in this chapter, which incidentally, is very well written.
ps.: Just to confirm: the fic takes place before the invasion?

I'd forgotten that I'd read this, and was truly enjoying it about 2 chapters ago, not at all remembering this gut-punch of an ending. Then a sneaking suspicion came creeping into my mind, and inkling of what's coming (the very ending, not the Zeus part).

A very in-character story, with moments of humor and frustration, and smaller moments of happiness, I could see it in my head like an episode, right down the the bizarre plot-twist ending. I couldn't believe I'd forgotten it, until I finished the last chapter and remembered it had saddened me enough to not think about the ending.

So how 'bout you add another chapter, that ends a little more optimistically? I know, Batman makes that so difficult, that man...

I'd forgotten how depressing this ending is, however fitting. Please, please write an epilogue...someday.

That story was simply amazing! Very descriptive and captivating! Although I don't like how she just left him there. Incase you haven't noticed, I'm a BMWW shipper, so I was expecting them to get together, but actually... It was a nice change from the other storyies I've read. It gave it an originality that most other stories don't have. Greta job! I look forward to reading more of your work. ;)

"Oh," said Diana disappointedly. She reached into her waistband and pulled several bills free. She'd have to give them back to Flash with her apologies. "He'd asked me to pick up a T-shirt for Hawk Girl."

That made me lol. And I really loved Diana here in a different way than other fics, it felt more clear and dark w/o being emo.

Zues was a bit jolting...I'm not sure how I feel about it. I almost expected it to be Hades. Eh...

The ending was meaningful and sad. Please write an epilogue with some hope! Bittersweet is okay...but just bitter is hard to swallow. Then again, given the tone of the entire story, maybe this could've ended no other way. I'm just sad. :( But your writing is splendid, I will look for more from you. I found you on someone else's author page actually, Kyouko something-or-another liked you so much she quoted from your fic, and you do have some good ones!

Ah, so you grew up around Baltimore, I take it. (Nobody ever mentions that city unless they lived nearby.)

Nice story so far. XD

Aww... poor, lonely Batman. I wanted them to be together. But, this is a funny, well-written story and i loved it. thanks for the good read!

Whistle and applause, this is one of the better accounts I've read

Fascinating read, though it makes me curious, how do you know how to escape binds? to write this you must be a pro escapist yourself

Zeus? what the hell?

Great chapter, awesome action.

Chaosmob :)