|Reviews for My Paper Heart|
| April chapter 15 . 4/4
Can you finish this story, please? I've never read one as intricate as this, and I'm too hooked to not know how Usagi lets Hiiro kiss the life out of her and love every second of it. :)
| none yet chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
Gosh, it's been 7 years since this was updated! I remember loving this story back when I was in high school, and a brief bout of nostalgia brought me back here. I still find this story very entertaining, and I keep holding out hope (passively when my mind does wonder back here) that some day I'll know where this was going and how it ends.
| Fanfiction Reade chapter 15 . 8/23/2012
This story is wonderful. I would agree with Usagi it's a very hard choice. But at the moment Duo seems the best. It seems they have a mysterious past. Rei and Trowa act rather charming in the story. When will Rei and Usagi see their father again? I can't wait to see what will happen when Wufei comes in with his weak onna comments. I think that this is one of the longest reviews I have written so will you please update soon. I'll ask Heero to make a wedding cake. Just let me buy a shield and very big insurance first:)
| NoLongerWriting-AbandonedAccou chapter 2 . 4/27/2012
Mkay, well you've waited plenty long enough to make an update, so you need to update like right now. If you need help or ideas or anything, you let me know I'll do my best but seriously. WHAT THE FRIGGIN HECK! YEARS! COME ON! Update. UPDATE!
Now I want you to listen to my instructions VERY carefully and follow them. Watch Gundam Wing Endless Walts, in subtitles on Youtube. com
Go to Mangafox. com and read the manga for Sailor Moon.
Now reread your FAVORITE gundamwing/sailormoon story.
Now REREAD your story.
I promise, afterall of that you will be inspired and you will update and if anything else, I am at your beck and call. We need more writers back in the gundam wing/sailor moon section. We need updates and finished stories. This is me begging you. Your story is amazing and deserves to be finished. Please do all of the above and PM me if you need my help otherwise I hope to see an update within the month.
| Sere Star chapter 15 . 10/16/2011
It's been a long time since I've read this story...and by long time...I mean like at least 7 years or so. It's funny when I was rereading the chapters and I see my name in the replies you wrote in the beginning of the chapters...brings back happy memories. lol Anywhoo I'm not sure if you're still checking your emails or however you get this review but I still love this story! Hopefully you're still writing this and haven't forgotten about it. I for one would love to know what happens next and would love to have this story completed. My email address is if you would like to contact me or send me your rough drafts...wink wink...haha I would love to talk to ya again! I know it's been like a few years since you've updated but I can only hope! P.S. Hopefully you'll get this and email me!
| devious.disaster chapter 15 . 5/13/2011
I love this story. You are an amazing writer, and it is a joy to read. So full of twists and turns...and Duo and Hiiro have to be my favorites. As well as Usagi. Love it Love it! Can't wait to read more...
| angel313 chapter 15 . 10/22/2009
This was awesome. Will u finish it?
| SachiNyoko chapter 15 . 10/1/2009
Okay so, let me just start by saying that I have read this story at least twenty times barring all exaggeration. Really it's one of the best crossovers I've ever read and it may not be a stretch to say I have an unhealthy obsession with it. For instance, the other day while struggling with an essay for my composition class I found myself randomly thinking of this story as a distraction. I don't think I've reviewed it before now though so I suppose it's high time I did.
I think the thing about this piece that draws me in the most is the conflict between the characters, the emotions that they both display and conceal along with their own personal secrets. Even though I'm inclined to be on Usagi's side and dislike Hiiro I can't help but sympathize with him on certain points. I imagine I'd be horribly jealous of Duo too in his situation.
Rei reminds me, in this story, of Jane Austen's Emma. I suppose that makes Trowa Mr. Knightley? Hehe, and Usagi is Harriet. But really I guess Rei is more modern, of course, maybe a bit more brash. I enjoy her nonetheless.
Quatre gives me bad joojoo vibes. Ha ha, but I think you intended it that way? He seems a bit sinister and dark. But it makes me really excited to see how he comes in later, and even better, how Wufei will play into the story. I agree with you that you got a bit sappy in this chapter, maybe even a tad over the top. But I won't complain because I enjoyed it so much, and like I said I've read the thing over and over.
Anyway, I'm sure you've heard again and again that your writing is exquisite so I won't bore you to death with telling you how awesome you are. I know real life prevents a lot of frequent updates but I truly hope you finish this story some day. In the mean time I'll keep finding songs that I think fit with it (Rachael Yamagata's Reason Why is my current favorite) and imagining my own endings. :P
| Chaos chapter 15 . 7/28/2009
Hey please continue on with the story I think its great! A very original concept to. I love it.
| Regin chapter 15 . 6/20/2009
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
| QueenOfHalf-BakedIdeas chapter 15 . 5/27/2009
Every once in a while, I'll come across an author that makes me wonder why they're wasting their talents on fanfiction, but greatful that they are nonetheless. I love your style. It's like Jane Austen as a modern young woman or Gossip Girl with a brain. And this last chapter really reminded me of The Awakening, probably due to the setting... Anyway, I know it's been almost a year now, but I'd really like to see more of this.
| spanderfan chapter 15 . 1/25/2009
I really hope you update soon! I love this story.
| Foxluna chapter 15 . 1/15/2009
u HAV to UPDATE THIS STORY! i LOVE IT! that last chapter tho i mean hiiro couldnt u hav bitten back ur own words... obviously not since u let her slip YET AGAIN! Duo does seem more fit to b with her than hiiro... since hirro keeps fucking it up apparently... but who will she choose is the question! -sighs sadly- i wish i knew...
poor usagi caught between the 2, i feel terable for her she has to choose but doesnt kno which...
caught between her emotions for these 2 boys, in a never ending cycle a war between her and her emotions. it sad really but i just hope whoever she chooses makes her happy and i mean actually happy... seems duo would b the perfect one for that, Hiiro could b if he wanted to badly, but same time not...
well PLEASE MAKE SURE TO UPDATE, please and thank u!
| Foxluna chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
cool i wanna read more of ur stuff...
| poems2songs chapter 15 . 1/7/2009
great update... seems that usagi is caught in something she has no control over unless she gets away from hiiro, duo, and the others she met... hope this is still a hiiro/usagi pairing... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...