Reviews for Security Problem
hercat chapter 2 . 6/20/2005
I liked both versions, but while the second chapter may be more consistent with the others, I think the first has a nicer flow to it. The second seems stilted, a little awkward.
lyapunov chapter 2 . 5/19/2004
I think the second version works better with the other drabbles. Its more subtle as well, i felt the end of the first version didn't ring true, and this is a big improvement.
Can i just add that the 'white house parking lot' drabble had me rolling on the floor, pure genius!
Keep them coming.
teaonthestairs chapter 1 . 5/19/2004
Oh I tried to review the second chapter but it said I have already reviewed it... Weirdness. Anyhow I think the second one does flow better with the series then the one from Buffy's point of view but I like both. I hope you write more of the series soon.
FooBarBaz chapter 2 . 5/19/2004
Now that you mention it, it does make more sense to stick with the West Wing point's of view. Despite that, I honestly didn't notice the "difference".
I think that either option works equally well (as a story) but the new one is probably a better choice.