Reviews for Dragonball AD Alternate Dimension
Musette Fujiwara chapter 18 . 2/14/2008
wow...

This was by the most complex and crazy fic I read so far but I liked it...

It happened through so many dimensions that I think I got lost a few time, but it was excellent how you mixed characters and for me the best is the twins soma and Adonai, they were so cute...

Bulma and her diferent people who she stays with that was hilarious...
Omnimalevolent chapter 18 . 6/23/2004
I've already read this...I found it on Kiadi's. Are you going to write Generation Z? Please do! It's now my fav story ever! (It's not too long and boring, what I wanted to happen happened etc etc.)
Nadz chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
Hey, your story's caught my interest. Poor Atsuko, having to live like that. I'm intrigued where this lightning power is coming from. I wonder if she's a Saiya-jin.
JDX chapter 18 . 6/11/2004
This was a good story grammarwise, but for some reason I don't like it very much. The plot just seemsa bit thin I think, or maybe it's that I don't like romance very much. Don't let me discourage you, because you're a ver good writer. I don't have any suggestions to you but to keep writing, and also, watch out that you give your original characters plenty of substance!
ineedbettername chapter 4 . 4/30/2004
NO! Atsuko died? Oh yeah. She got revived. Yay! Though that evil guy really is a bastard (pardon my language, but there's really no other words less obscene for him).
ineedbettername chapter 2 . 4/30/2004
Ou, destruction! Nice escape scene but you need a bit more detail in the story in general. BTW, is supposed to be like ?
ineedbettername chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
Good story so far, but the lack of background story is a bit of a turn-off for me. Have you written another story that's like a prequel to this? I'd like to read it. Fav stories list for now. Author later.
wolf chapter 18 . 4/27/2004
humm yay it was good but 18 chapters and no reviews untile now that I know of I don't know how you did it.