Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sanctuary of Light
Guest chapter 24 . 3/4
So you used a pronoun done as the past tense for, is wrong the past tense is Died not done.
Done is a beautifull type of small pigeon.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/2
Good yarn but get rid of th bad americanisms on your grammer. One does not write dumbledore rather one writes to dumbledore. A noun in a sentence like this must Always have a prepositon before you srudy other languages you Will find that prepositon reutinely preceed nouns and verbs.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/1/2016
Please you fuckng hypocrite, when you get your head out of stoner land where everything is nice and peaceful and come back to reality
Guest chapter 19 . 12/1/2016
Because thats how life works you have to forgive someone to make yourself happy, unfortunately the world isn't sunshine and fucking rainbows and I'd think I'd hate life if it was
Ghost Dragon Master chapter 28 . 12/1/2016
Okay this is a very good fanfic so I would like to urge you to continue it. It has been 11 years since your last update so I would suggest reading the fanfic before continuing it. You have done a great job at this a decade ago so I know you can do just as good and maybe even better if you decide to continue this.
Ghost Dragon Master chapter 25 . 12/1/2016
Ok you would think that Lupin wouldn't be so quick to pass judgment with the barest of evidence and without hearing Harry's side of the story, and Black, he has experience with being framed for a crime he didn't commit so they both should have waited until Harry told his side, add that to the fact that they were close to Harry they should how KNOWN he wouldn't have done what he was framed for doing. I think they should suffer and Harry should only tell them he forgives them on their deathbeds if at all.
Calmzone1 chapter 28 . 8/10/2016
great story, really hope you have the chance t finish it one day. so glad I stumbled across it
Calmzone1 chapter 27 . 8/10/2016
I'm so sad to hear that you get blocked while writing. You write so well that one would never know. Your ideas are original and interesting. I have one chapter left to go, and as it is now 2016, I can only hope that I can find that you've moved to a different site to continue...hopefully! Brilliant
Calmzone1 chapter 11 . 8/10/2016
very interesting story. (just fyi, you said that when he became an elf that the scar disappeared, yet here you have him concealing it)
CrazyGirlWhoLovesVamps chapter 28 . 4/12/2016
Please continue
StoneTheLoner chapter 11 . 2/4/2016
Dropped. This is clearly a Hurt/Comfort/ story, and possibly Drama as well. For sure not something I will enjoy. But after looking up above and seeing just how old this story is, it's kind of pointless of me to leave a review, so whatever. T_T
StoneTheLoner chapter 10 . 2/4/2016
Why does he "Have" to forgive people who betrayed him deeply? Not sure I'm going to read about this naive and childish Harry for much longer.
StoneTheLoner chapter 6 . 2/4/2016
I hope you don't make him super emotional and vulnerable whenever things get stressful. What with the way he cried when he found out about being part elf when it should have just shocked him at first, crying when he gets his first sight of this new city, and the goofy inclusion of Elves only being able to die in battle and... of a broken heart?... Wtf? Worst survival trait to exist possibly ever. It's right up there with those goats who become paralyzed for a short bit when frightened. How the h*ll does that trait help a goat out run a mountain lion trying to eat it lol? But of course I understand he just got out of prison, so it could just be temporary.
The Bagpiper chapter 28 . 1/27/2016
It's such a shame that you never finished this story... I have been smiling through it all so far...
Oogies4u chapter 28 . 1/3/2016
Got to tell you I enjoy this story very much. Hope your muse will allow you to finish this story :)
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