Reviews for To be a Star
Andreiush chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
That was the sweetest, sadest story i've ever read! Your writing is just wonderful! I almost cried! I felt like i was in Ranma's head for real! You're so talented!
AkaneAlways chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
Oh wow. This was a really great introspective piece! Any chance of a sequel where Ranma "becomes a star"? Great story!
Kikaili chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
That fic was really good.
I mean awesome.
I can't find the words.
It was so sweet, honestly it was one of the most straight up sweet fics I've ever read. Please continue to write, kay?
Bye,
Kikaili
Doctor Emmit Brown chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
O. I like it. Very introspective. Ranma's life was just too complicated. There's no reason why he shouldn't want a normal life.
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very interesting use of imagery with the clouds and stars and the like. You managed to describe his feelings using this imagry very well. The rain part was great as well.
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I can't wait to see where you go with this. Why was Akane crying? Maybe she was thinking the same thing about her own life? I hope Ranma doesn't delay in his plans for that house with the picket fence and Akane too long. Akane probably can't wait any longer.
-Doc