|Reviews for Optical Illusion|
| staidwaters chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
You have this thing for twisted last paragraphs, don't you?
Actually, I can't figure out how you wrote this in the first place. I'd say it's nothing like your other work, except bits of it are, and it's 100% like the films... You know, my first thought upon watching "once upon a time in mexico" was "how crazy do you have to be to think something like that up?" (actually, it was my second. The first was "that was really, really awesome") My feelings following this fic are remarkably similar.
Thanks for the read!
| CyanideDreams610 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Awesome fic! You really deserve more reviews for it!
| Kaija West chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
You've got one of the best "Sand's voices" I've read. Really, I could hear him saying every line. That was an enjoyable story. Your level of detail about Bowes (and pretty much everything) was good, just enough but not too much. For a moment at the beginning I was like, "Oh, yuck, a boring Sands/OC fic," but no! You surprised me with a cool adventure fic with plot. Nicely done.