Reviews for The Right Time
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Ok I am hooked! On pins and needles and everything! When/where/how/ do they meet. What happens! Give it up!

This is an excellent beginning, full of mystery and promise. Good characterization, fairly good use of dialogue too. Looking forward to the next installment
Gen chapter 1 . 3/22/2001
Really like the story, Sweet and it's make you think about the way thing happen, it really get to the spirit of the show.
LuckyLadybug66 chapter 1 . 1/23/2001
Very cute lil story, but I don't like the idea of Mr. Smith in a bar!