Reviews for Abstract
ZAMB1E chapter 4 . 8/12/2012
Please continue this story it is awesome :D
cara9001 chapter 4 . 1/17/2012
Nice fic it's really freaky
Red-Damascus-Steel chapter 4 . 8/22/2011
AH! Vegeta is in deep! I'm so glad you've taking the time to continue this. Have me hooked even more so than before! Who's pulling the strings? This story gets me so hyped-up and giddy no matter how many times I read it or think about it. I hope to see more :]
Red-Damascus-Steel chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Continue already!



I want to know if Vegeta is truly insane or if someone's pulling strings... I have to know more, I've taken a real liking to your story.
Sammy15 chapter 4 . 7/18/2011
HOLY CRAP this is nuts! In the best way possible of course! Please update soon.
PihlajaPuu chapter 4 . 6/26/2011
Whoa, the story's getting really creepy. o_o

But I love it! What a original plot... wow. Well written and oh so interesting. I'm dying to know what will happen on the coming chapters... ahhh, the suspense!
ansam chapter 4 . 6/24/2011

I want to know what's going to happen hurry, is he dreaming?
I-dont-do-calm-like-ever chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
its sad that this never got finished. it was really good. i do hope some day you finish this up. id love to know how it ends. was he really insane, or was he kidnapped by something or someone and forced to believe this stuff?
R. Yiruma chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
wow ... im like 5 years late .. but this seems really good .. very original
Sexual Deviant chapter 4 . 4/14/2006


I need to get my thoughts sorted...

but keep updating. This holds promise.
Sexual Deviant chapter 3 . 4/14/2006

And now...

I am officially lost...

and I have no idea what could possibly happen next.
Sexual Deviant chapter 2 . 4/14/2006


The cliffhanger would've killed me if I knew I couldn't read the other chapters right away...

I am just totally drooling at how this will turn out. Vegeta and Goku...


The question Vegeta truly insane?
Sexual Deviant chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Holy shit I love it...

I just noticed that people in mental wards normally attract me...

hence me reading this story. XD
scrappster chapter 4 . 10/20/2004
Wow, XD damn, well, I was farting around one night, bored shitless, and I went to my sis's story(Brutal Fate), and I clicked you to see if you had any good stories. I found this, and decided to check it out. (btw, that challenge thing is tempting, definitely, but in the story I'm writing it prob won't be happening for a while...X.x; quite a shame, really) I read this, and man XD

Vegeta's insane, Goku's insane, Chichi's insane, I'm insane! Keep writing, I can't stand not knowing what's happening. XD It's very good so far, I like how you're writting. It's kinda, confusing, but still easy to follow and read(which is good, I am a horrible reader X.x; ). The confusion in it isn't bad though, it just protrays what Vegeta's going through right now.

*cough* I donno, I'm really tired, I wish I could help you more. Anyway, the best I can say is keep on writtin, and now I'm going to go read some of your other stories. You've captured me. XD
Kimmy Jarl chapter 4 . 8/26/2004
Well, I’m totally fascinated.

Don’t know why, but I liked Chichi the most, she seemed like a truth in the midst of lies. Strange.
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