|Reviews for Unforgivable Promises|
| Bella Katelyn chapter 29 . 8/10
I'd love to see you write another Harry and Snape story this is one of my top favourites
| Mystical G Panther chapter 31 . 6/15
| Espied7 chapter 31 . 5/9
Wonderful story! Thanks for writing.
| Anna chapter 31 . 4/20
| Fenris Jin chapter 31 . 4/17
Great story conclusion! XD
I certainly enjoyed Luna, Ginny, Neville, Hermione and Ron. I normally don't like Ron, but in here, he's a cool friend. With him picking up tricks from Severus on how to deal with Molly, it's actually looking up to be a good friendship between them.
I'm glad you weren't squeamish in writing the main characters, especially the Gryffindors, to doing the dirty job of fatally getting rid of the DEs. Not that I enjoy gore, but I think it was a stage in the character development of children who fought in the war that needed to be addressed, and even if it was just Hermione who was really shown to have experienced it, it adds realism to the situation. :)
Kudos on finishing this story! :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 30 . 4/17
Your different take on the prophecy is quite superb.
I actually found that it made more sense than the actual canon. XD
Technically speaking, that part where it says, 'neither can live while the other survives', actually doesn't ring true in canon with Horcruxes and all. Harry is one of Voldemort's anchor to life, they could both live their merry lives, as it's even more beneficial for the Dark Lord to keep Harry happy and whole than to actually kill him. XD
So yeah, the way you played off the connection of Voldemort marking Harry with the scar, giving him equal power over the Dark Lord and the Dark Mark he is known for, and the scar created being the possible way to destroy him, very well. Great job! XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 4/15
Whoa! The plot is getting more intense!
Poor Luna. She's a tough kid though.
It's really exciting that you squeezed an already compacted time constraint regarding Severus' Death Mark, as it should be called. Harry has a talent for whinging it, and luck has always been on his side, it'll work out.
Now Severus would just feel foolish for being sentimental at giving his trainees pretty, pretty wands. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 4/15
Who'd have thought Mundungus to be a fairly good fighter? XD
The coming out was technically anti-climactic. I think the other Gryffindors almost were disappointed that it wasn't as earth shattering as dueling the Dark Lord himself. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 4/15
Hmm.. Interesting. I love how the Combat lessons include not only combat in the physical sense but the mentality as well.
It's quite a unique outlook to have Severus change sides because of the Longbottoms.. I think I quite like it. Although I appreciate Canon!Severus' defection due to Lily, I think I admire this outlook more as the truth of his morality than love. Love is precious, but as a source of guidance, it can either lead to salvation or condemnation, creation or destruction, depending on the situation and the people involved.
| Fenris Jin chapter 8 . 4/15
Magical combat, not dueling! This I must see! XD
So few people appreciate Severus' sense of humor.. although maybe that's because he's only been around Gryffindors. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 4/15
This is a very interesting take on how Severus and Harry's relationship grow.
The pensieve trick reminds me of The Eternal Sunshine of a Spotless mind. XD
| maggie1618 chapter 31 . 4/7
So good! loved it 3 Great story development.
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 31 . 3/4
Amazing story, absolutely amazing. This is absolutely a must read for any true Snarry fan.
| dawnraptor chapter 25 . 2/16
What!? No Pensieve?
| Guest chapter 31 . 2/7
That was the best fan fiction I've ever read. Thank you for writing it.