Reviews for Unforgivable Promises
enahma chapter 2 . 5/2/2004
's a very fine piece of work.
Very good characterisations.
More, please!
Enahma
Enahma chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
A very goos beginning! I'm looking forward to see what's next!
Enahma
Shivani chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
Waiting to see where this goes. :)
javierr55 chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
Nice story, the conversation with Snape was great and in some ways enlightening, it reflects quite well their personalities. Please post soon. Keep the good work.
Javier
Paula chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
Very well written so far. Please continue with this work. Just one suggestion, yo misspelled a name. It's Lupin not Lupine. Please continue, it is enjoyable so far.
Lily and James Potter chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
hey very good story so far. But Lupine is spelled Lupin with out the e. Just so you know! Update soon.
Glorfindel of Gondolin chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
Umm, interesting start. I noticed one minor error in your work through - you kept typing Lupine, his name is Lupin. Just so you know.
aschowin chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
good chapter. I hope to read more soon.
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